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Just a start with a rough draft

Fri, 07 Sep 2012 21:56:35 +0100

I wanna write a new monster fanfiction now :O

So, I'm going to post some ideas for it. Basically, this is rough draft. Gonna throw little people characters with hardly information :o

Main Characters
Johiro (M) - Yokelby
Troy (M) - Bulkaff
December (F) - Impoz

^These 3 are all rivals.

Arianna (F) - Cautant
Zayden (M) - Lizaur

^Traveling buddies?

Evil Characters
Organization - Team Night Fear
-Main people
Callaway (M) - Veroceti and Barnacold
Scarlet (F) - Toodro and Whispon

Minor Characters
Ancient Sages
Nurse Vera
Officer Alice

Character Descriptions

Johiro

Troy
A guy that favors traveling alone. He wants only strong monsters and he knows that to get what he wants, he has to work hard for it. He has a bit of a rivalry with Johiro. His main goal to gather the strongest monsters and take down Johiro, ultimately defeating him. His main partner is Bulkaff (will evolve). Troy is able to handle himself quite well. He keeps his emotions intact, not letting them get the best of his actions.

December

Beginning : Starfall Town - Morning
Johiro, Troy, and December finally turned 12 and passed the Starfall Trainers Academy to become Monster Trainers. They all get their starter monsters and travel together for a few maps until they reach their first town before going their separate ways.

The story focuses on Johiro, he is the main main character. Troy and December will appear a lot in the story. Introductions for Arianna and Zayden will be coming soon.[/u][/u]

[Important]Monster manga

Tue, 17 Jul 2012 04:22:16 +0100

Was thinking of making a short online manga for monster.
Who would like to be in it. of course it will be comic style images with speech bubbles or actions.
will be short. so i would only need a few people.

How to be in it?

I'll pick from your character descriptions.

character personality. appearance, monster choice.

Excited to try this out!.

Character Maker - Darksora03

Sun, 04 Mar 2012 01:48:25 +0000

Character- Ashley Blazer

Description (Its alot, warning)- A trainer that has been rival with Jack along time, he has been living with his parents till He was 14. He is 16 years old right now, he trains in alot of areas such as Pallet Town. He travels the world to find many Pokemons and to max out all the indigo region/Kanto Region. He is a silent boys that trains when he is alone and bored, dreaming to become the Pokemon Master was almost everyones dream, besides one... Jack is wanting to be the Kanto Elite Four Champion to train his pokemon harder then anyone else. Ashley has came across 4 gyms and half of his pokemons are evolved form. Have not been moving around since he found the perfect place to train his pokemons.

Age- 16 (He was 14 when he started his journey)

Pokemons that he owns:

Gengar(Level 42)-
Once this pokemon was a haunter when Ashley caught him, he evolved it when he was in a rough situation.
He got the 4th badge by defeating 3 pokemon at once without fainting!! He faced many strong pokemons and is still standing. Winning the Gengar when he was a Haunter was pretty impossible, Ashley Blazer says. Gengar is Ashley's favorite pokemon and is the highest level so far out of his pokemons.

Moves:
Mean Look
Shadow Ball
Night Daze
Psychic

Gender- Male

Blastoise(Level 37)-
Was his 2nd favorite pokemon and his first one, this one was given from Professor Oak in Pallet Town. This pokemon won the 2nd badge when it was a Wartortle. Now that this pokemon is grown Professor Oak finally gave Ashley a Pokedex now that he was strong enough. Blastoise Hydro Pump was replaced with Water Gun. Blastoise also found a Master Ball once and Ashley still has it.

Moves:
Hydro Pump
Skull Bash
Roar
Leer

Gender- Male

Ralts(Level 24)-
Once Ashley was battling this pokemon and caught it with a Great Ball. Ralts used many Psychic moves to survive, but Blastoise was able to take care of Ralts with its Hydro Pump. Enough of that move the pokemon was finally caught!
Ralts Psychic attack is its strongest one which makes his Psychic Power Real powerful.

Moves:
Psychic
Confusion
Leer

Gender- Female

Thats all the Pokemon Ashley has. But his Rival has more then he does...
Ill make more once im done searching what pokemon he should get, also write about it, Bye-Bye!!

Feedback: The Dead Land

Sun, 04 Dec 2011 02:13:40 +0000

Feedback thread for my Fanfiction here:

https://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Thread-T...igin-Story

And... comment away!

The Monsters: Feedback Thread

Fri, 02 Dec 2011 02:43:32 +0000

Any relevant feedback, criticism, compliments, questions, and stuff like that should be posted here.

1) Don't stray off-topic (The Monsters is the topic).
2) I am not really open to story/plot suggestions whatsoever, but I am open to story/writing feedback, writing suggestions, etc.
3) Keep the forum rules in mind.

Latest TM Chapter:
Chapter One: Consciousness

Nativity in Black-IC

Wed, 30 Nov 2011 13:52:14 +0000

this is gonna be a story of my own,but the user penned stories doesnt have an ideas section(*facepalm*) so post a few character ideas.i dont wanna give the plot away,but its gonna be a sword n sorcery kinda thingish..
Note-i do have a main character, so i need supporting cast and villians.

The Great Destruction - Idea Collecting.

Fri, 18 Nov 2011 19:59:20 +0000

Primary Notes :
1. There will be a pokemon version of this, please don't make one.
2. There is no introduction in the first few paragraphs.. I'll take you through a memory (flashback) in the middle of the action.

3. The idea came from a story in a literature book and was viewed as a movie then into our monsters. (The story is called The Waters of Babylon. It had "The Great Fire" which destroyed us all by something we brought upon ourselves sort of. Our world is gone and there have been survivors. Read the story on your own time, no more questions about it lol)

4. I'll be taking ideas in the idea thread for this.
5. I am not making chapters of this. It's just going to be 1 big story.
6. I will try and put a future-to-past theme into this. Like, the story moves from the future into the past before the major event.

7. It is not an exploring story like getting all the gym badges. This is a destruction to the world of monsters that takes place in the future.

Alright guys, help me with your ideas.

What I need :
1. Character names. At least 3 per person. Some names will not be used.
2. I need 1 evil person. No teams.

3. The 3 characters are the main characters. They need 1 main monster which is their partner. You can give them all 6 monsters if you want. Please note which monster is the partner of which character.

4. The main characters cannot have legends. They cannot have a full team of zeniths. They can only have 1 zenith, 1 starter, and let the rest be superior, regular, or emissary.

5. The evil character can have up to 2 legends, 1 zenith (+ a duplicate), 1 Starter, the rest are emissary, superior, or regular. You don't have to have legends, zeniths, or starters. The evil person can also have some monsters in their own storage.

6. The evil character must have a secret base, I want your idea where it should be. Underground, undersea, space, or in the sky.

It will be an awesome story

I got the idea today and I'm glad I'm putting it down since I tend to forget all my ideas =_= So, I would like some of our community's ideas to be put into this. Not everyone's ideas will be taken, sorry.

Also, please give a biology of your characters. Give them a personality, their favorite monsters, or anything. Their appearance is not really important. Don't make them noob.. Like Ash. Give them a partner like.. How I made Aero's partner (in my other mmo fanfic) a Fightengu.

This story is an action based story and could be scary lol depends on how I put it.

We should liven up our fanfiction section with some good ideas. Thx everyone ^_^ I'm only writing it, not taking credit for everything. Also, do not use your own username as a character please.

I will have a credits list updated in this thread once all ideas are taken. It will be something like..

"Character credit goes to bla bla. The character that was used was bla bla and his partner bla bla."

I'm going to have fun with this and I hope everyone else does too.

Pokemon Rausten Update

Sun, 06 Nov 2011 04:45:12 +0000

Ahah, hey everyone, Grey here. \(^_^)

I have some good news, and I have some bad news...

Good news is, I has a poll on here for the chapter after next!

Bad news is, I won't be able to publish the next chapter until next week. @.@

Sorry I haven't been doing anything with the fanfic, I've been rather busy with school lately. Apparently, I was failing three classes and never noticed... >.<

Anyways...I'll have to wait until next Friday...that's like...6 days... @.@

So yeah, sorry guys. Also, this poll is for what will appear in the chapter after next.

If you go with Evan's first legendary encounter, tell me which legendary you want. If a certain one is popular, I'll use it, ahah.

Once again, sorry for not posting.

-Grey

My story character Needing.

Thu, 29 Sep 2011 02:58:55 +0100

Rival -
someone who has strong pokemons.

Champion -
Anyone who wants to be in the Elite Four

2nd Traveler -
A person who is gonna travel with Ryan.

Pokemon Breeders -
Anyone who likes contests.

Gym Holders 1-7 -
Gym people that has to be fair with their pokemon.
Gym Leader 7!
Name - Draco
Appearence - Tall, Epic, Have a CAPE!
Team
Druddigon - Lv44
Flygon - Lv45
Garchomp - Lv48
Haxorus - Lv50
Salamence - Lv52

I will put more soon so be polite.
If you have any ideas please put it up soon Thank You,

Fanfiction announcement.

Sat, 30 Jul 2011 16:25:28 +0100

I'm going to write a Monstermmorpg fanfiction. It will be like a history, it won't focus on any main character.

More to come, This topic will be updated.

Nitsua's Fanfiction show.

Thu, 14 Jul 2011 00:22:12 +0100

If you have any questions about Fanfiction, writing tips, or anything to do with general composition, I would like to offer my 5 years of experience to all of you.

Feel free to post anything.

This is kind of like a Q&A, but for Fanfiction, writing, and the ilk.

Fans of my fanfic read please...

Mon, 04 Jul 2011 08:53:38 +0100

Okay so, I'm pretty sure most of you were wondering when the 3rd chapter will come out. I probably won't be writing anything for a while...Sad I know. I'm rather busy with other things in real life, so I can't sit down and write for a bit. If anyone would like to I don't know..."take over" I suppose, message me what you'd make the 3rd chapter and we'll see. I'm quite sure most of you are rather bummed out.

Yours, with much love

Grey

P.S. I might drop by for a visit on the forums every now and again, but serious writing and/or playing, shall not be happening.

MONSTERMMORPG FANFIC IS BEING WORKED ON! :D

Fri, 10 Jun 2011 18:13:36 +0100

Hahah, greetings all, well, all the polls are done and we have a cast of characters now... =3

Main adventures: Evan, Jennifer, and Juno

Bad Guys: Fish and Mia (and their sidekick Flotz)

Rival: Sapphira

Other members are...

Leader of Team Cosmic: Dallas

Evan's brother and his other rival in his quest to catch all the monsters: Jack

Assorted Trainers...I'll use some people in the forums names. =3 If you wanna request your character for a chapter, tell me in a PM. Now, I'll be publishing the first chapter either later today or tomorrow if I don't have time today...

I'm gonna make a Monster MMORPG fanfic, lookin' for extra characters

Mon, 23 May 2011 08:36:05 +0100

Okay so, I wanna make a random fan fic, and publish chapters on here every week or somethin. I'm lookin' for at least...5 extra characters 2 to adventure with mine, 2 to be the random bad guys (like team rocket) and then 1 to be my guy's main rival...who he encounters at regular intervals. I'm giving a week for applications. post yours by the 30th and I'll choose 5, I may also use other people's names through out the story. If you have any extra ideas while I'm writin' don't be afraid to pm me. If you'd like to enter a chapter, ask me about it and we might be able to work somethin' out... Applications are to look like this

Character Name:
Position(one of two adventurers, bad guys, rival):
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Team(doesn't matter how many monsters just not a million...):
Why you'd like to be in it:

Remember, by the 30th and no later, any other applications will be denied.

I may make a poll for tough choices I can't make.

This is mine

Character Name: Evan Grey
Position: Main Character
Age: 15
Appearance: A rather tall guy, he has long black hair that hangs around his face. He has black sunglasses and dog tags around his neck.He also has a black fedora he wears. He wears a red overcoat over a black t-shirt. He has a brown bag that hangs from his side. He has black baggy pants with a hanging pouch for his Monster Boxes.
Personality: Nice to everyone he meets and always ready for an adventure. A bit of a carefree person, he tends to sleep under trees whenever he gets bored of walking. He loves to talk and hates when it's quiet. When he gets ready for a battle, he simply stretches tilts his fedora and throws out his monster, he doesn't care about winning or losing, it's the experience that matters. He loves his Geshi, Skiarf and Voodoll, he tends to capture every monster he meets, and always spends time with them when he gets the chance.
Team: Geshi, Skiarf, Voodoll.
Why you'd like to be in it: I love writing ^_^