2012-08-08, 10:23 PM
On the central explore page, for which users are on when they walk around the world (accessed through the 'Game Page' button), the browser description reads "Explore Maps, Catch Monsters, Train Monsters, Do Battles."
This description would be strengthened by changing the final phrase from "Do Battles" to "Fight Battles." 'Fight is a far more descriptive verb and to 'do' a battle come off as a less professional/mature descriptor.
I'll be happy to highlight other ways to strengthen the site diction should you wish.
~A
This description would be strengthened by changing the final phrase from "Do Battles" to "Fight Battles." 'Fight is a far more descriptive verb and to 'do' a battle come off as a less professional/mature descriptor.
I'll be happy to highlight other ways to strengthen the site diction should you wish.
~A