~Wolfmii's redrawing CLOSED

wolfmii · (This post was last modified: 2012-03-14, 09:26 PM by wolfmii.)

EDIT

i will not be doing redraws anymore sorry! D:
i am not comfortable working with textures or under pressure.

it was nice being here though thank you!

SkyRock · 2012-03-05, 11:21 AM

Hmm...Good..But It depends on your coloring skills that will make it usable.

**Lolzinator** · 2012-03-05, 11:24 AM

agree with Rock, Colors means alot! but great work though Smile

**CeFurkan** · 2012-03-05, 02:22 PM

(2012-03-05, 11:24 AM)Lolzinator Wrote: agree with Rock, Colors means alot! but great work though

actually coloring is the 99% of the drawing Big Grin

now lets wait and see what she will be able to do Cool

SparrowHawk · 2012-03-05, 07:27 PM

I like that coodra. Good job Big Grin

wolfmii · 2012-03-05, 09:09 PM

YES i know the coloring is everything, so i will put my all~!
thank you very much for all your comments!

Henrie · 2012-03-05, 09:10 PM

Ahaha, I'm loving it! He's adorable. Look forward to seeing him finished.

wolfmii · 2012-03-05, 09:25 PM

(2012-03-05, 09:10 PM)Henrie Wrote: Ahaha, I'm loving it! He's adorable. Look forward to seeing him finished.

thank you~

Pein · 2012-03-05, 10:12 PM

the outline is so well done now just to see the colours

Miyavi · 2012-03-05, 11:39 PM

as they have said coloring is very crucial because it changes everything. infact you dont need to necessarily out line. anyway suggestion i would put to the redraw is add eyes under the eye-shield. many reason but the big picture is with jointed eye-shield it looks very cartoonist, plane and simple and most of the time thats why this monsters are being redrawn. ** ahem** furkan shoulda told me this was the problem **cough ** other then that good job...

wolfmii · 2012-03-06, 03:00 AM

(2012-03-05, 11:39 PM)Miyavi Wrote: as they have said coloring is very crucial because it changes everything. infact you dont need to necessarily out line. anyway suggestion i would put to the redraw is add eyes under the eye-shield. many reason but the big picture is with jointed eye-shield it looks very cartoonist, plane and simple and most of the time thats why this monsters are being redrawn. ** ahem** furkan shoulda told me this was the problem **cough ** other then that good job...

yeah i know that i will try my best. actually iv done coloring without outline before and i think thats what ill do ^^
also im thinking of just making it with eyes. no eye shield thingy. furkan said i could do that so ill try it out and see. also because its the first evolution i picture them more "childish" so this one will be cute, but still realistic looking.

thank you very much for commenting, it means alot~!

**CeFurkan** · 2012-03-06, 03:04 AM

well cant wait to see final result :d

PcKaveman · 2012-03-06, 03:15 AM

interesting take on the monster. I like it actually, excited to see what you will do with this!

garbagekeeper · 2012-03-06, 03:51 AM

ahhh i'm excited to see what you do too :> you seem pretty good as it is, but if you need any help or anything feel free to ask :'D Though I doubt you'll need it

wolfmii · 2012-03-06, 04:03 AM

(2012-03-06, 03:51 AM)garbagekeeper Wrote: ahhh i'm excited to see what you do too :> you seem pretty good as it is, but if you need any help or anything feel free to ask :'D Though I doubt you'll need it

thank you every one!

and thank you keeper~ if i run into something ill let you know ^^

**CeFurkan** · (This post was last modified: 2012-03-06, 12:19 PM by CeFurkan.)

certainly not bad but need some more texture to become more realistic

but so far better than previous version Big Grin

wolfmii · 2012-03-06, 03:18 PM

(2012-03-06, 12:19 PM)CeFurkan Wrote: certainly not bad but need some more texture to become more realistic

but so far better than previous version

thank you~
and yes, im not done, just showing it off ^^

wolfmii · 2012-03-06, 08:01 PM

TAKING A BREAK TOMORROW.
i need to clean my home, do laundry and such.

orboknown · 2012-03-06, 08:04 PM

Yea don't double post.
art is good thus far.

garbagekeeper · 2012-03-06, 08:20 PM

Looking good \ouo/

Pein · 2012-03-06, 08:46 PM

looks every good so far

Mia Shaw · 2012-03-06, 09:54 PM

Very nice job. I like the changes with the blue tongue, lighter horns and having eyes instead of a visor. Looking forward to seeing the finished product.

wolfmii · 2012-03-06, 09:54 PM

(2012-03-06, 08:04 PM)orboknown Wrote: Yea don't double post.
art is good thus far.

why cant i double post? sorry im new here, it be nice to know these things ^^;

other wise, thank you all of you~
anything i need to change?

orboknown · 2012-03-06, 09:58 PM

Read the global rules announcement. That contains all the rules for the site.

SparrowHawk · 2012-03-06, 10:05 PM

Add some texture o-o

Ghost · 2012-03-07, 12:20 AM

Me Gusta Mucho ;w;

**zacherymatthews** · (This post was last modified: 2012-03-07, 01:45 AM by zacherymatthews.)

just a suggestion,could you maybe make the eyes yellow in the middle ? also you should make the visor look like its attached to its head,but can be moved on an off

wolfmii · 2012-03-09, 12:19 AM

tell me what you think of these!
remember i encourage critics!

i took the suggestion above and also added texture.

tell me which you prefer and if the texture is good or not!

[Image: suggestions_by_thewhitewolf_mii-d4s8sc7.png]

[Image: suggestions_by_thewhitewolf_mii-d4s8sc7.png]

SparrowHawk · 2012-03-09, 12:25 AM

(2012-03-09, 12:19 AM)wolfmii Wrote: tell me what you think of these!
remember i encourage critics!

i took the suggestion above and also added texture.

tell me which you prefer and if the texture is good or not!

Saying it as 1 (upper left) 2 (upper right) 3 (lower left) 4 (lower right)

1. I like it.
2. Don't like the visor with eyes, maybe try making a visor with no eyes.
3. I don't think yellow eyes seem proper. It's just my opinion, I don't like it. I think it's better plain.
4. Opinion of #2 and #3.

wolfmii · (This post was last modified: 2012-03-09, 12:29 AM by wolfmii.)

thank you!

i love the first one as well, but suggestions are helpfull as well ^^