[Crobbywobby]

Make the back feet like the 2 in front, then it'll be awesome

[zacherymatthews]

personally i think it's be cool for it to have 2 birdlike talons as feet, and like a talon in th back of its leg, like a dogs leg, yanno?

[sinnelius]

Ha! I felt so too!

Talon doesn't work though.. i tried and it looks like an eagle trying to hop.
Just doesn't work.
Here's adjusted version.


Gimme some idea and maybe i'll give it some design adjusment during color.

[sinnelius]

Oh, and i happen to do the lineart for the last evo too! 

[staff vidyasagar]

very very awesome

[tons_o_snot]

fine looking art, but looks more equine than reptilian to me

[Qurac23]

so far, so good keep up the good work

[Santy]

no no no no. its gonna look like ancient again :p hehe 

its like always pretty awesome. I like the last evolution with the skull! im big fan again!

[ch17175]

Beautiful

[sinnelius]

Thanks guys! Santy too!

Oh and, tons, do you have an idea what you want the last evolution to be?
I had the idea that the last evolution to be something of a mix... So i went for equine since it'll add more speed and strength by the final evolution.

I am interested to know what you had in mind.

Santy too!
If there's any ancients you favor, show me!

[tons_o_snot]

I had the idea that the last evolution to be something of a mix... So i went for equine since it'll add more speed and strength by the final evolution.

Well, i guess i see your point, and it's fine because you're the one coming up with it, but how about a centaur-lizardman mix(obviosly skeletal, unless you wanted to get rid of it by now)?

Just to keep your idea while also keeping your first concept of a komodo-like monster and the original skeleton line, maybe with some decaying flesh here and there, just to keep away the "geometrical decay/regeneration(i don't know if you're making it more or less skeletal for each evolution)" look you used for the last ones.

And as always, it is just my opinion, by no means i'd say it's better or that yours is bad or anything.

Keep up the good work, if you feel like it, you know.

[sinnelius]

Of course not! I kinda fail my inspirations at this point and feel like taking more opinion for the last two.

Something just doesn't work.

And yes i am glad you seem to catch my intention... 
Lizard man is a no though... humanoid is not an option by Chef.

More of your thoughts please!

[zacherymatthews]

Ha! I felt so too!

Talon doesn't work though.. i tried and it looks like an eagle trying to hop.
Just doesn't work.
Here's adjusted version.


Gimme some idea and maybe i'll give it some design adjusment during color.

oh me oh my <3 <3 <3

[TexasToast]

I'm seeing a massive improvement in your skill, Sinnelius! Keep it up!

[zacherymatthews]

It would look SICK with a saberlike arm o; lie beedralls hand

[CeFurkan]

wow looking pretty awesome

[shadowananime]

yes sinneuls but the final form on top looks more like a  dog then a lizard sorry just my opinon just keep your work up your good at this

[Qurac23]

with the bones sticking out it looks like that character(kimimaro) from naruto with that ability

[Santy]

More thoughts? you should keep that last one!!! That haunted feel is so awesome!

[sinnelius]

Ahaha, guys thank you for stoping by. 

It's kinda shitty but i still find them dissapointing. Sorry for doing this again...your feedbacks were much appreciated, but as shadowananime pointed... there's that inconsistency of idea that happened and i felt pulled aback by it.

I definitely will be keeping the haunted feeling though, Santy. It's the central theme, along with the gas and degradation. I'm glad that part is much clearer now.

Let's do this again.

Second form Gammaro ... i am using this since the previous one have this, strange, unlizardly feeling...
Perhaps because it's done from the front and the perspective was not as good.

This is the same, but from different view.



Third form Martigor. Added wings and lizardly arms to keep it consistent. 
BOnes will be visible but i find that skeletal arms and legs are just imbalance for this case.

Lot's of ribbones then.




Here's the last of design. 

I hope they are readable enough and feel free to leave your thoughts or wait it out.

[Santy]

Hey those drawings are amazing!!

But i liked the pose of the previous second one and skeleton on that third one, but ur right, its more like kinda dog or something. You can keep the previous version(s) for other monster XD hahahaa.

[sinnelius]

Hey those drawings are amazing!!

But i liked the pose of the previous second one and skeleton on that third one, but ur right, its more like kinda dog or something. You can keep the previous version(s) for other monster XD hahahaa.

Yeah, I think that second pose was...the best ever too. 

I've ever drawn, i mean.

Maybe i'll try incorporating it...  As for the previous third skeleton, I'll keep a note.

[zacherymatthews]

Whenever you start makin' new mons. Please make a cute bunny ^.^ I love bunnies :3 and sarcuda. If you make a mon similar to sarcuda, like a water/grass type. I will squeal like a little school girl cx

[ch17175]

Sinnelius, the only problem with the first second form you did was just the claws. If you just only changed the toenails into claws on the back feet without completely redoing the whole drawing. It will be great. The third form looks epic.

[shadowananime]

i like the secoend form of the redraws are amzing i like the wings they are awsome

[sinnelius]

Hey ch17175... it's really jarring with spikes all over the place. 
Zacherry, noted. Next one will be bunnies.

And shadow, thank you







i think these are finals. Clean lineart soon.

[zacherymatthews]

Omg. Omg. Omg. Omg. Can't wait! Bunnies are so cute!! <3 ^.^

[tons_o_snot]

looking good

[Santy]

OMG!!!! that last one is gonna be better than some ancients!!

[SkyRock]

The third one is dragon type?
It's gonna be a majestic mother of gob.