MonsterMMORPG advertisment (:

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:30 AM

https://www.onrpg.com/boards/186752.html#post2641038 <----theres my advertisment,i hope yall like it as well as others (:

Guider456 · 2011-09-19, 01:33 AM

not enough details

Pein · 2011-09-19, 01:33 AM

should include more pics but its cool

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:33 AM

mmk ill edit

Treason · 2011-09-19, 01:34 AM

a few grammar mistakes

**PatrickStarr** · 2011-09-19, 01:34 AM

You Could of added more , Such as Details about more monsters coming soon ,
How to Navigate through Maps and stuff etc .

Pein · 2011-09-19, 01:35 AM

yea and show some of the maps and monsters in the game

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:37 AM

mmk,thanks,ill get right to it

Lamb · 2011-09-19, 01:38 AM

Wow, no offense, but this advertisement really isn't that good at all. It lacks details, persuasion, pictures, and all that. You really need to fix this up.

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:39 AM

>.> i give up

SparrowHawk · (This post was last modified: 2011-09-19, 01:40 AM by SparrowHawk.)

(2011-09-19, 01:38 AM)Lamb Wrote: Wow, no offense, but this advertisement really isn't that good at all. It lacks details, persuasion, pictures, and all that. You really need to fix this up.

I agree.

Also zach, I already advertised in that forum.

**PatrickStarr** · 2011-09-19, 01:40 AM

Don't be mean , just give him suggestions and he'll get better thats all.

Lamb · (This post was last modified: 2011-09-19, 01:43 AM by Lamb.)

(2011-09-19, 01:39 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote: >.> i give up

Don't give up, just fix up your advertisement.

(2011-09-19, 01:40 AM)Void Wrote: Don't be mean , just give him suggestions and he'll get better thats all.

I wasn't being mean, I said "no offense".

Edit: Dei, what the heck? Why did you take away my signature privileges???

Guider456 · 2011-09-19, 01:42 AM

lol dei

Treason · 2011-09-19, 01:44 AM

xD thats why i stopped making ads

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:44 AM

im not tryin to persuade the person to play this game,its a great game,but its up to them to play this game

SparrowHawk · 2011-09-19, 01:44 AM

(2011-09-19, 01:44 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote: im not tryin to persuade the person to play this game,its a great game,but its up to them to play this game

Dude.. When you're making an advertisement, PERSUASION IS KEY TO SUCCESS!

Lamb · (This post was last modified: 2011-09-19, 01:46 AM by Lamb.)

(2011-09-19, 01:44 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote: im not tryin to persuade the person to play this game,its a great game,but its up to them to play this game

Actually, an advertisement is supposed to persuade a person to do something.

DEI GIVE ME BACK MY SIGNATURE AGH!!!

**PatrickStarr** · 2011-09-19, 01:46 AM

Yea .. Just Like Dei persuade'd me to play MonsterMMORPG Big Grin

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:46 AM

not to me,to me an advertisment is telling the viewer about the game

Guider456 · 2011-09-19, 01:46 AM

advertisement=propaganda=persuasion

SparrowHawk · 2011-09-19, 01:47 AM

(2011-09-19, 01:46 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote: not to me,to me an advertisment is telling the viewer about the game

Then you shouldn't do advertisements.

Advertisements are there to persuade people.

Do you watch tv? All the commercials in between are there to persuade people into buying those products.

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:48 AM

ik but i dont look at it that way,whats the point of persuading people if half the time they dont even come ??

SparrowHawk · 2011-09-19, 01:48 AM

(2011-09-19, 01:48 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote: ik but i dont look at it that way,whats the point of persuading people if half the time they dont even come ??

If you can't persuade them, it's probably the way you explained it or they just don't like to explore.

Stay in school

**PatrickStarr** · (This post was last modified: 2011-09-19, 01:50 AM by PatrickStarr.)

No Don't , Lamb Doesn't deserve it !
Also Don't tell Zach Whats bad , tell him how to get better

SparrowHawk · 2011-09-19, 01:51 AM

(2011-09-19, 01:50 AM)Void Wrote: No Don't , Lamb Doesn't deserve it !
Also Don't tell Zach Whats bad , tell him how to get better

He can't get better if he doesn't understand.

**PatrickStarr** · 2011-09-19, 01:52 AM

He Can't get better without being told how

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:57 AM

thx void,seems your the only one to think so

Nitz_X · 2011-09-19, 01:59 AM

Team Chrono ftw https://www.onrpg.com/boards/186752.html#post2641051

**zacherymatthews** · 2011-09-19, 01:59 AM

XD ^.