Final Moves List typos and grammar check

Guider456 · 2011-08-31, 03:22 AM

if i screenshoted it would take forever >_> so ima just post whats wrong then the correction

Nature Heal-This move restores user’s half of the Maximum HP.doesn't sound right heres what it should say Nature Heal-This move restores half of the user's Maximum HP.

Round Strike-User attacks the enemy by rounding around to find its weakest point for not miss. again doesn't sound right sounds better like this. Round Strike-User attacks the enemy by rounding around it to find its weakest point for an always hit.

Insect Buzz-The user vibrates its wings to generate a damaging sound wave that also lower the target’s Special Defense stat. the only thing i see wrong is that lower should say lowers.

Mega Stab-A lethal attack with a the sharpest part of the body. the only thing i see wrong is this.Mega Stab-A lethal attack with the sharpest part of the body. just take out that a between with and the.

Lunar Light-If weather is cloudy restored HP is equal to 25% of User's MaximumHP else if weather is normal restored HP is equal to 50% of User's MaximumHP else if weather is Cloudless restored HP is equal to 75% of User's MaximumHP. else? or just sounds better for me also normal=partly cloudy right?

Power Absorb-(2 parts right here) part 1:User becomes fainted after this move executed. This move decreases the enemy's Attack and Special Attack stat by 10 stages and will not work once 5 stages are decreased.
in between move and executed there should be either an is or has been. also this thing sounds confusing to me:This move decreases the enemy's Attack and Special Attack stat by 10 stages and will not work once 5 stages are decreased. is the 10 all together or each? might wanna clear that up. Part 2: User uses it's own life force completey to decrease enemy's Attack and Special Attack power sharply. it's should be
its also doesn't sound right.here's what i think it should say. User uses all of its own complete life force to decrease enemy's Attack and Special Attack power sharply.

Darkest Dream-The users creates a shadow that will appear and attempt to hypnotically put the opponent to sleep. the only thing i see wrong is that users should be user.

Horrifying Cry-The user cries with an incredible power that inflict damage to the enemy and also decreases enemy's Special Attack. the only thing i see wrong is that inflict should be inflicts

Dark Threat-The users uses it menancing aura to strike the opponent, decreasing the foe's special attack. only things i see wrong is that users should be user and it should be its.

Shadow Arm-User strikes to the foe with shadow arms to inflict damage which may also cringe target. only thing i see wrong is that the first to should be taken out.

Dark Blade-(2 parts) part 1:This move has a 35% chance of cause bleeding at the foe. cause should be causing. part 2: User attacks the target with mysterious blade which may also cause bleeding on target. there should be an a in between with and mysterious.

Dark Roar-A loud roar that is so mysterious that one feel sad when they hear it. only thing i see wrong is that feel should be feels.

Shadow Game-Dark Physical 75 80 15 0 High priority move. doesn't show any +priority here and yet. User uses shadows to distribute enemys attention and attack first. This is a high priority move and goes first at battle. it says priority here also enemys should be enemy's.

Pitch Black-The user throws a pitch black shadow ball which inflicts damage and also frightening enemy and cause Accuracy decrease at foe.
cause should be causes.

Moon Impact-A physical impact with a huge amount of collective dark collective energy, either take out the first collective or the second one also the , should be a period .

Ink Bomb-A mass quantity of dark energy. not even a sentence anyway to make it sound better it should say something like this. A mass quantity of dark energy is released to cause damage to the foe and to also reduce the foe's accuracy.

Deadly Beat-User throws shadows fists to beat foe. shadows should be shadow.

Lunar Liberation-This move absorbs all the light around the targets surrounding. targets should be target's.

Soul Reap-The user creates a scythe using psychic to attack the target.
kinda sounds weird sounds better like this. The user creates a scythe using psychic power to attack the target.

Pendulum Swing-A move that affects the target mind increasing their sense of time keeping. target should be target's and there should be a by in between mind and increasing.

Dragon Tornado-This move has a 100% chance to cause the foe to cringe. If the user attacks second, it cannot make the opponent cringe. Low priority move. this kinda confuses me since its low priority and the only time it can cringe is when the opponent is using low priority. so either lower the percent of the cringe and make it regular priority or just get rid of the cringe effect? just a suggestion. anyways

Dragon Blitz-The user tackles the target while exhibiting overwhelming menace that may also make the target cringe. there should be an between exhibiting and overwhelming.

Ozone Burst-A blast of compressed air. not a sentence sounds better like this. A blast of compressed air is released and may also burn the enemy.

Meteor Rain-A great meteor rain summoned down from the sky onto the target for extreme damage, but also causes recoil damage to the user as a decrease of its Special Attack. there should be an is in between rain and summoned. the second part confuses me it does recoil damage and sharply lowers special attack? or the recoil damage is the lowering special attack? elaborate please,anyways

Rampage-nothing with it except i don't take recoil damage from it

Total Eclipse-The user soars to the sky blocking the sunlight and then releases a breath of energy. since it says total eclipse add that it blocks the moonlight too.

Electricity Charge-By using the electricity on it's body, user charges electricity which increases users Special Defense and Special Attack stat by 1 stages. just 2 minor things. 1.users should be user's. 2. stages should be stage since its only 1.

High Voltage-A powerfull shock of electricity that is concentrated at the core of ones body. 3 things 1.powerfull should be powerful. 2. that should be taken out. 3. ones should be one's.

Electric Discharge-User randomly discharges different amount of electricity to the around and inflict damage to the foe with different powers. amount should be amounts.

Electric Sparks-The user attacks with many electric sparks that hits 2-5 times in a row. hits should be hit.

Thunder Ray-Beam of electricity surrouded by statics to paralayze the target. 2 things 1. surrouded should be surrounded. 2. paralayze should be paralyze.

Thunder Spear-A lighting attack that is thrown at the enemy. lighting should be lightning.

Thunder Claw-An attack with a sharp portion of the body that is surrounded by an energetic lightning that makes outrages sounds when it connects with the target. outrages should be outrageous.

Electric Strike-A flare of electricity is loosed to strike the foe that may also paralzye foe. paralzye should be paralyze.

Lightning Ball-Description:An eletrical blast conjugated into a shape of a ball. looks strange should look something like this. An electrical blast is conjugated into a shape of a ball.

Thunder Fall-A series of lighting is shot up in the sky that will relentlessly hit the target. lighting should be lightning

Predict-(part 1)This move increases the user's Evasion stat by 3 stage and will not work once 5 stages are increased. Very high priority move. stage should be stages.
(part 2)Using its intuition, the user increase it's evasion 3 stages. This is a very high priority move and goes first at battle.
increase should be increases.

Focus Force-User focuses its body energy to blow a shock wave to the target that may also paralzye target. paralzye should be paralyze.

Weak Point-Looking for an vulnerability, the user strikes continually that lets user to hit critical hits more easly. easly should be easily.

Full Nelson-The opponent is place in a headlock and then slammed on the floor. place should be placed.

Aerial Dive-The user attacks the target with an uppercut, who is then thrown skyward with incredible force. This move also high critical hit rate. there should be has after also.

Throw Over-The user catches the target and throw it over on the field with enormous power that may cringe target. throw should be throws.

Concentration Blast-The user heightens its mental focus and unleashes its power that also lower the target’s Special Defense. lower should be lowers.

Super Strength-The user attacks the target with full power and blow a devastating damage with the cost of decreasing it's Attack and Defense power. it's should be its.

Beat Up-The user attacks foe without any mercy and beats it up badly which will also hurts the user itself. hurts should be hurt.

Concentration Punch-The user focuses its mind and launches a very strong punch, but this punch may get distributed easly which makes move a weaker hit. This is a low priority move and goes last at battle. easly should be easily.

Exhausting Strike-(2 parts) part 1:If this move successfully hits, it will knock out (KO) the opponent instantly unless opponent does not have any KO preventing effects. After this move used user will become fainted. does not have should be has.
part 2:The user uses all of its strenght for dealing 1 final blow to the enemy which will also faint user too. strenght should be strength.

Live Coal-series of burning rocks that is thrown at the target. doesn't sound right should say. The user launches a series of burning rocks that are thrown at the target.

Fireball-A quick release attack of fire that has been conjugated in a shape of a ball. in should be into.

Flame Armor-The user cloaks itself with flame and attack the enemy with the flame gathered that also increases user's Speed stat. both flame should be flames. attack should be attacks.

Bright Flame-A blinding brightfull concentrated heat. brightfull should be brightful.

Flare-A fast bolt of fire that is released from a fire type Monster breath. Monster should be Monster's.

Fire Claw-User attack fiercely with heated claw. attack should be attacks. there should be an a after with and before heated.

Split Blast-A fire concentrated energy that is blasted in two beam. beam should be beams.

Inferno-Powerfull release of fire around the users surrounding. powerfull should be powerful. users should be user's. surrounding should be surroundings.

Inferno Onrush-Description:A high speed tackle with the users body covered with fire. users should be user's.

Whispy Strike-An attack that generates fire from parts of the target body. target should be target's.

Fire Storm-User holds its breath first turn and then release it at next turn which deals extreme damage. release should be releases.

Atmosphere Flame-If this move successfully hits, it will knock out (KO) the opponent instantly unless opponent does has KO preventing effects. Hit accuracy will be determined by this formula: hit accuracy = ((level of user - level of enemy)+20)%

either get rid of does or change has to have.

Storm Fist-The user attacks with incredible fists that hits 2-5 times in a row. hits should be hit.

Extreme Dive-The user flys high into the sky then dive with an extreme speed that may also cringe target. dive should be dives.

Fly Dance-The user makes a weird dance on the sky and then attack foe with great speed that may also confuse target. attack should be attacks.

Wind Wave-A powerfull gust of wind that surrounds the user increasing their momentum.powerfull should be powerful. their should be its.

Hurricane Wing-An attack consist of violent wind created by the flapping of wings. consists should be consists. wind should be winds.

Diamond Wind-An attack that require the user to flap their wings with high intense speed which creates a strong gust. require should be requires. their should be its.

Tornado-A very powerful gust that hit hards and causes enormous damage. hit hards should be hits hard.

Dive Bomb-A powerfull tackle that requires an intense series of flying maneuvers. powerfull should be powerful.

Dark Mind-Distort the the target mental stability. distort should be distorts.

Horror Chant-Long and loud incantation that will paranoid the target. incantation should be incantations.

Hollow Bubbles-The user attacks with repeated bubbles that hits 2-5 times in a row. hits should be hit.

Shadow Fang-The user attacks with fangs which is made by shadows and inflict highly critical damage. inflict should be inflicts.

Herbal Guard-The user protects itself by wrapping its body in herbs that drastically raising the user’s Defense. raising should be raise.

Root-The user uses roots of trees around itself to trap enemy and by consuming energy from roots restore it's health slightly. it's should be its.

Leaf Claw-User attack with leaf thin sharp claw. attack should be attacks. a should be in between with and leaf.

Thorny Strike-The user blows a strong strike with it's torns to deal damage which may also cause the target to cringe. it's should be its. torns should be thorns.

Spike Whip-A vine whip attack with thrones growing on the side. thrones should be thorns.

Solar Claw-An attack that is enhance with the power of sunlight. enhance should be enhanced.

Crash Impact-A full body attack enchanted with plants around the user body. user should be user's.

Leaf Hurricane-The user whips up a storm of leaves around the target but usage of this move recoil harshly and reduces the user’s Special Attack stat. the and needs to be taken out.

Earth Shock-User hits the ground with an incredible force and shake the earth shockingly. shake should be shakes.

Dust Illusionist-A mass quantity of sands that reduce the target's accuracy. sands should be sand. reduce should be reduces.

Terrorize-The user frightens the foe with by sending a wave of dirt. This move lowers the Speed stat of the opponent. take out with.

Mud Grenade-The user launches a hard-packed mud ball to attack that also lower the target’s Accuracy. lower should be lowers.

Roll Crush-The user crushes its targets by rolling over them with its rolled-up body that may make the target cringe. targets should be target. them should be it.

Flatten-The user stomps down on the ground with an incredible power that inflicts damage foe and also decreases foe Ppeed stat. there should be onto the in between damage and foe. Ppeed should be Speed.

Terraform-The user makes the ground under the target erupt with power to inflict great damage that also lower the target’s Special Defense. lower should be lowers.

Gaia Crush-A full body tackle enchanted with rock armor around the user body. user should be user's.

Sand Storm-By using special ability user compose a sand storm around the target that deals greate damage. compose should be composes. greate should be great.

Ground Shatter-A powerfull smash on the ground towards the target . powerfull should be powerful.

Ice Needles-The user launches sharp icicles at the target that hits 2-5 times in a row. hits should be hit.

Hail Stone- Using its breath, an ice ball if formed which is flung at the foe which may also free enemy. if should be is.
free should be freeze.

Frost Breeze-The user takes a deep breath into its core and breathes frosty air out to the foe. Because this takes time, it has low priority and goes last in battle. High critical hit probablility. probablility should be probability.

FrostBite-A bite with intense cold teaths. teaths should be teeth.

Snow Rain-User compose a heavy hail storm on foe that may freeze target. compose should be composes.

Glacier-The user launches a large body of ice to the opponent. This move causes inflicts harm onto the foe while at the same time increasing the users speed. either take out causes or take out inflicts. users should be user's.

Ice Pillar-A powerfull smash on to a boulder of ice towards the target projecting in countless pieces. powerfull should be powerful. on to should be onto.

Ice Ray-A curious beam of light freezes whatever it touches into a solid block of ice. whatever should be whenever.

Cold Crush-A full body attack enchanted with ice armor around the user body. user should be user's.

Absolute Zero-(2 parts) part 1: If this move successfully hits, it will knock out (KO) the opponent instantly unless opponent does has any KO preventing effects. either change has to have or take out does. part 2: Instantly abosrbs all the heat from the target. abosrbs should be absorbs.

Shadow Purge-A bright light that illuminates everything in its surrounding. surrounding should be surroundings.

Light Armor-This move increases the user's Special Defense stat by 1 stages and will not work once 5 stages are gained or if the user's Speed stat is 2000. instead of Speed it should say Special Defense.

Light Restore-By using the Sun or Stars light, user restores it's HP. instead of it's it should say its.

Light Rays-The user attacks with multiple light rays that hits 2-5 times in a row. instead of hits it should say hit.

Charged Ray-The user attacks with an charged ray of light that also raise user's Special Attack stat. instead of an it should say a. instead of raise it should say raises.

Lightning Sword-User compose a sword from light and blow a high critical hit. instead of compose it should say composes. instead of blow it should say blows.

Light Blast-The user draws power from nature and fires it at the target that also lower the target’s Special Defense. lower should be lowers.

Aura Orb-The user looses a blast of aura power from deep within its body at the target that never miss. miss should be misses.

Light Wave-Series of light waves that impares the target judgements. since i can't find impares in the college dictionary i'm thinking it should be impales. judgements should be judgments.

Ray Cannon-The user gathers all its light energy and releases it at once that also lower the target’s Special Defense stat. lower should be lowers.

Light Purge-The user lets loose a damaging burst of light. It also reduce the target’s Special Defense stat. reduce should be reduces.

Aura Heal-Monster uses it's special ability to restore the HP of all team members. it's should be its.

Concentration Rest-User focus it's all concentration for 1 turn and fully restores it's HP. doesn't sound right,should say something like this. User focuses all of its concentration for 1 turn and fully restores its HP.

Chest Beat-The foe beats its chest to pump itself up increasing its Attack to the maximum but decreases its Defense to the lowest. The foe should be The user.

Double Time-The user moves with heightened speed and agility to increase it’s evasion. it's should be its.

Encase-The user harden’s its body to raise its Defense. harden's should be hardens.

Strange Dance-Makes foe to fall asleep with a strange dance. take out to.

Stone Skin-(Normal Physical 0 1000 5 0 ) The user hardens it skin extremely and increase Defense and Special Defense stat. instead of physical it should say status. increase should be increases.

Tricky Fun-The user makes very funny motions that distracts foe and lowers foe's Special Attack harsly. distracts should be distract. harsly should be harshly.

Recover Rest-User takes a break of attacking and cures it's own wounds. it's should be its.

Regular Heal-The users summons up its will and heals half its Maximum HP. users should be user.

Unique Attack-Monster attacks with it's unique abilities. it's should be its.

Sleeping Strike-The user strikes blindly and cause random damage. cause should be causes.

Crush Strike-This move inflict damage based on user's level and luck. Damage formula is like this : (Random Number) X (User's Level/5) where Random Number is between 1-8. This move will do at least 1 damage. inflict should be inflicts.

Particle Rain-Objects around the Monster are thrown to the opponent to deal damage and hits 2-5 times in a row. hits should be hit.

Dual Hit-The user slams the target with a long tail, vines, or tentacle that hit twice in a row. vines should be vine. hit should be hits.

Prevent-This move prevent enemy switch Monster for 2-5 turns. prevent should be prevents.

Strike-The foe hit bluntly with a fist, tail, etc. there should be an is in between foe and hit.

Prior Strike-User anticipates and hit a smashing blow to the enemy. This is a very high priority move and goes first at battle. hit should be hits.

Horrifying Sound-The user attacks the target with an horrifying sound that may also paralyze foe. an should be a.

Pick-This move has a 40% chance of cause bleeding at the foe. cause should be causing.

Take Revenge-User attacks the foe with an icredible desire of revenge. icredible should be incredible.

Extreme Strike-The user charges the target at blinding speed and hit before enemy take action. This is a high priority move and goes first at battle. hit should be hits. take should be takes.

Cry Out-User attacks foe with an incredible cry that may paralyzes foe. paralyzes should be paralyze.

Extraordinary Strike-User attacks the opponent with a extraordinary weapon which may Paralyze, Cringe or Poison the foe. a should be an.

Enrage-The user rampages and deals greate damage, and as a result it cannot use a move the next turn. greate should be great.

Pounce-A powerfull smash comonly use by big size monster. powerfull should be powerful. comonly should be commonly. use should be used. size should be sized.

Luck Try-User tries extremly hard move to inflict great damage on enemy. extremly should be extremely.

Self Explosion-If this move successfully hits, it will knock out (KO) the opponent instantly unless opponent does has a KO preventing effect. After this move is used, user will fainted. either take out does or change has to have.

Poison Cloud-User compose around itself a poisonous cloud that increases user's Attack, Defense, and Accuracy stats. compose should be composes.

Corrosion-The user spits acidic fluid that can even melt the targets skin that result in harsh reduce of the target’s Special Defense stat. targets should be target's. result should be results.

Clarity-The user attacks by throwing a clump of special mud that resets enemy stats changes of target. stats should be stat.

Toxical Spit-The user drenches the target in a special poisonous liquid that also poison target always. poison should be poisons.

Mind Control-The user uses it's Psychic powers to control foe's mind and make it confused. it's should be its.

Mind Shift-Using its psychic power of suggestion user convince enemy and decrease its Accuracy greatly. convince should be convinces.

Psychical Strike-The user uses it's Psychical powers to decrease enemy accuracy severely. it's should be its.

Clear Mind-The user meditates deeply and raise its Special Attack greatly. raise should be raises.

Power Wave-This move inflict damage based on user's level and luck. Damage formula is like this: (Random Number) X (User's Level/5) where Random Number is between 1-8. This move will do at least 1 damage. inflict should be inflicts. The foe is attacked with an mental energy wave. The attack varies in intensity. an should be a.

Psychical Stance-The user takes a stance that enhances its Psychical powers and attack while holding its special stance. attack should be attacks.

Psyburn-A fire blast that is controled with psychic. controled should be controlled.

Magic Pulse-An mysterious colord energy ball. An should be A.

SynchroBlast-A powerfull force that blast the target. powerfull should be powerful. blast should be blasts.

Moon Kick- A kick that is enhance with psychic. enhance should be enhanced.

Mystifying Horns-A psychic attack shape like a horn. shape should be shaped.

Mind Strike-User focused its mind to damage the enemy telepathically. focused should be focuses.

Stone Polish-The user polishes its body to reduce drag that sharply raise the Speed stat. raise should be raises.

Stone Barrage-The user hurls hard rocks at the target that hits 2-5 times in a row. hits should be hit.

Stone Crush-The user buries the foe in a barrage of heavy stones which will result in lowering at enemey's Speed and chance of causing the enemy to cringe. at should be an. enemey's should be enemy's.

Severe Crush-The users pick up a large rock and crushes the opponent with it. users should be user. pick should be picks.

Legendary Power-The user summons rocks that it then sends flying towards the opponent and has a slight change of increasing all of the user's stats. change should be chance.

Hill Climb-The user attacks the target by smashing into it with incredible force that may also confuse the target. This move is also usefull at outside of battles. usefull should be useful.

Mantle Crush-A powerfull smash on the ground that can shatter the whole make up of the ground. powerfull should be powerful.

Stone Break-The user gathers its all strenght first turn and then launches a huge boulder at the target to attack second turn to inflict great damage. its all strenght should be all of its strength.

Skull Smash-The user attacks the target with a hazardous, full-power headbutt that also cause user to take terrible recoil damage and may cringe target. cause should be causes.

Body Shed-The user sheds part of its body to make itself lighter and sharply raise its Speed stat. raise should be raises.

Resonance-A series of magnetic energy that is concentrated at the core of ones body. ones should be one's.

Serial Punch-The user attacks with repeated jabs that hits 2-5 times in a row. hits should be hit.

Magnetic Ray-A ray of energy that enhance the poller magnitudes of steels. enhance should be enhances.

Refection Strike-The user looses a flash of energy at the target from its polished body that also lower the target’s Accuracy. lower should be lowers.

Iron Fist-A powerfull fist as dense as an iron. powerfull should be powerful.

Metal Storm-User compose a storm which is composed by small metals that may alsocause bleeding. compose should be composes. alsocause should be two words not 1.

Blade Smash-A powerfull strike that requires the user to harden parts of its body with metal element. powerfull should be powerful.

Destructive Squeeze-The user catches the foe and squeeze it severely which may also cause the foe to cringe. squeeze should be squeezes.

Steel Fist-The target is hit with a hard punch fired like a meteor which also raise the user’s Attack. raise should be raises.

Meteor Shower- Series burning rocks that attacks the target with high velocity and destructive power. there should be an of between series and burning.

Destroy Mode-The user get into an attacking stage that lowering its Defense and Special Defense stats but sharply raising Attack, Special Attack, and Speed stats. get should be gets. lowering should be lowers. raising should be raises.

Liquid Defense-The user create a barrier between itself and the opponent, increasing its defense. create should be creates.

Water Ball-A quick release attack of water that has been conjugated in a shape of a ball. 2-5 times in a row with great speed. in should be into.

Aqua Shot-The user lunges at the target at a speed that makes it almost invisible that enable user to attack first. This is a high priority move and goes first at battle. enable should be enables.

Aqua Sonic-A powerfull formeless wave made up of water that can't be seen with the naked eyes. powerfull should be powerful. formeless should be formless. eyes should be eye.

Water Claw-A claw attack that is enhance with water to its surrounding. enhance should be enhanced. surrounding should be surroundings.

Water Fang-A fand attack enhance with water element. fand should be fang. enhance should be enhanced.

Sloppy Spit-The user attacks by shooting sloppy water at the opposing team that also lower the target’s accuracy. lower should be lowers.

Steam Pump-Powerfull devastating blast of steam. Powerfull should be Powerful.

Hyper Cannon-User prepares its body first turn to be able fast water squirt at next turn and deal extreme damage to foe. the sentence doesn't sound right should say something like this. User prepares its body first turn to be able to do a fast water squirt at next turn and deal extreme damage to foe.

okay that should be most of the grammar errors....