[Metaknight]

Chapter 1

larvitle: Come on flolz wake up its 8:00!
Flolz: .....yaawn what do u want i was having a dream i was i diccaccio
larvitle: I dont care.....
Flolz: Why did u wake me up!
Larvitle: umm our moms told us to goto the store and buy some monster items
Flolz: What kind?
Larvitle: Food, medicine, blah blah blah i got the list on what we need lets go!
Narrator: Flolz and Larvitle were walking down to the store and they account a enemie blocking the route...
Larvitle: Do u see something up a head?
Flolz: im to tired to look at stuff u woke me up 8:00 am in the morning just to goto the store and buy junk -.-
Larvitle: eeeeeek whats that?!!
Flolz: Oh my god
Dragur: WHO ARE YOU SHRIMPOS?!
flolz and larvitle: umm were just trying to get some groceries for our mom and dad mister..dragur
Dragur:ILL SAY THIS IF YOU BEAT ME IN A BATTLE I WILL LET YOU GO OKAY!?

To be continued.....
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[Dark.Zero]

hmm not bad start keep it up my friend.

[Metaknight]

Each chapter will have 2 part and there is 15 - 20 chapters i plan to do

[Nitz_X]

THis looks like a script for a play.

[Metaknight]

lol it wouldnt make sence if it was a big bundle of writing