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A New World
#1
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Its this new story im making.. Read it!!
http://www.wattpad.com/story/2124593-a-new-world
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#2
Edit: NVM
Gonna edit again full of your errors. Bwahaha!

The Magicians
have planned to make a new world. It is nearly impossible, and can even destroy
the human world. Some Magicians have agreed with this, But there is
one Magician who doesn't agree, -insert name of male main character here- ; A
so called wimp at everything. Although(Can't start with "but"), he doesn't know what kind of power
he wields.

A new world is about to be made. The problem is, when the new world is
constructed, it is not another one. The world will just be overwritten.

What the magicians don't know is, there is another danger coming.


Edited to a more grammar-correct form.
Your life just got better. 

You're welcome.

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#3
Okay, thanks, maybe
Since i have an editor there lol ::3

And that was the description..
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#4
So are you done with the first one? Me check. I have an account... it's the username you've prolly already guessed.
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#5
The first one? Im stuck in chapter 4

Im having a really huge writers block @-@
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#6
sounds....different. but i do agree with ghost. too many errors for my liking.
#7
Shabump! I need more views
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