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2012-10-07, 03:07 PM
(This post was last modified: 2012-10-07, 03:14 PM by SparrowHawk.)
Good, this one doesn't lag my computer. Checking for grammatical errors.
Honestly saying, grammar is pretty alright. There are only so few with very precise errors that it doesn't make much of a difference. If we can understand it, then it's fine.
Physical Traits
#18) They have a unusual eye color > They have an unusual eye color
("an" is used before words starting with vowels)
#34 - 41) ect. > etc.
(minor grammar issue)
Honestly saying, grammar is pretty alright. There are only so few with very precise errors that it doesn't make much of a difference. If we can understand it, then it's fine.
Physical Traits
#18) They have a unusual eye color > They have an unusual eye color
("an" is used before words starting with vowels)
#34 - 41) ect. > etc.
(minor grammar issue)
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Version 1.1.2 TEST - by CeFurkan - 2012-10-07, 02:47 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by DarkVoid - 2012-10-07, 02:48 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by night phoenix - 2012-10-07, 02:49 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by kunwarkharbanda - 2012-10-07, 02:50 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by staff vidyasagar - 2012-10-07, 02:51 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by night phoenix - 2012-10-07, 02:54 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by SparrowHawk - 2012-10-07, 03:07 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by CeFurkan - 2012-10-07, 03:24 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by zacherymatthews - 2012-10-07, 03:51 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by monster power - 2012-10-07, 03:56 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Viperianw - 2012-10-07, 04:00 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Ghost - 2012-10-07, 04:08 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Quanto_Konami - 2012-10-07, 04:58 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Ghost - 2012-10-07, 05:00 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Quanto_Konami - 2012-10-07, 05:25 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Viperianw - 2012-10-08, 03:40 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by zacherymatthews - 2012-10-07, 05:34 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by mike521 - 2012-10-07, 06:15 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Ghost - 2012-10-07, 06:44 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Quanto_Konami - 2012-10-07, 06:45 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by garbagekeeper - 2012-10-07, 08:53 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Quanto_Konami - 2012-10-07, 09:01 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Cpt. Obvious - 2012-10-07, 11:15 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by zacherymatthews - 2012-10-08, 03:00 AM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Ramza_X - 2012-10-08, 01:00 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Char02 - 2012-10-08, 09:52 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by fjkulit - 2012-10-08, 09:55 PM
RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST - by Ghost - 2012-10-08, 10:17 PM
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