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Monster MMORPG Game Official Forum
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Shadows - short story
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Poll Results
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How may I improve the quality of this story?
I can't think of anything right now
37.50%
ch17175
,
SparrowHawk
,
Viperianw
3
37.50%
Not enough info in the intro
0%
0
0%
I don't feel attached toward the main character
37.50%
Dark.Zero
,
Pyro Piglet
,
Viperianw
3
37.50%
You needed to describe the environments better
0%
0
0%
You gotta work on the sentence structure
25.00%
Pyro Piglet
,
SparrowHawk
2
25.00%
You can't write. Period.
0%
0
0%
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