2012-05-25, 05:58 AM
Hiya everyone!!! SO, Im writing a book, but no matter what, i cant get any good criticism from my family/ friends because theyre, well, family and friends. I need all of your opinions, good or bad, truthfully and honestly. I also need a title!! Its called the Cold Truth now, but that doesnt really fit. So, Its about an orphan named Alex and his story. Here it is. Please be honest, and enjoy!!
PS.
Chapter 4 is not yet completed. Keep reading and I'm sure it'll get more interesting. ^_^
PS.
Chapter 4 is not yet completed. Keep reading and I'm sure it'll get more interesting. ^_^