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Tell me what you think I can improve on here before I post this anywhere.
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Rated E for Epicness
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Monsters stalk our world, Everything has been turned upside down!

But out of the mist emerges Monster masters!

We are the ones chosen to control the awesome power that these creatures possess.


We must all come together and bring this world back to humans.

Together, with our superior technology and Intelligence,

We can defeat the strongmen and women that control the Averium Isles

Join us now,

Capture Monsters Today,

Take the world back,

And become,

The ultimate Monster Master!

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See the world from a bird's eye view!


Look to the Videos here to learn how to play in a few short and simple steps!
VIDEO 1
VIDEO 2
VIDEO 3
FORUM VIDEO
(Thank you to Dark_Flamez For the videos)

Demand total control of the Top Trainers board!

(Can you top the best Masters in all the land?)

And remember,

Solord Is Waiting!

But...

Some of us are not...


Copyright "cefurkan", Monstermmorpg is a friendly game that is suitable for all ages. Artwork done by (), Coding done by (), and the game is moderated by ()

cool.10 on 10 by me.

Post Is fully updated and Now Ready for viewing. I may Resize the screenshots With Photoshop tonight If I have time.

its pretty neat.

Nice..It's a good Ad and it really sounds like the ads appearing at the sides of the game.

I'm looking for errors, if you think anything needs approval before I send it to Cefurkan, Please tell me so that I don't look foolish before I present it

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EDIT; I am going to make pictures smaller.

i will release sample ad soon. the links and their anchor texts are the most important thing and then the images and videos etc

LOL nitz the beggining sounds Corny. When i see ads like those i ignor them >.>

nice job.you put some creative writing effort into it.

(2011-09-21, 04:45 AM)Ghost Wrote: [ -> ]LOL nitz the beggining sounds Corny. When i see ads like those i ignor them >.>

It may be corny but it's fit for kids

Since Nitz said that stuff at the beginning, I would probably have him create a TV commercial lol

I actually could make an audio ad lol. I have a mic on my new computer, and it has lots of weird voices.

(2011-09-21, 07:23 PM)Nitz_X Wrote: [ -> ]I actually could make an audio ad lol. I have a mic on my new computer, and it has lots of weird voices.

I think that could come in handy with a youtube Ad before videos ya know?

Advertising could be better

But those losers need to chill out and stop disrespecting this place before even trying it. It's pretty decent and way better than all those easy and boring mmos.

This game would be more addictive it had music. I listen to music when i actually sit down to play, and get hooked for hours.

(2011-09-21, 07:29 PM)Nitz_X Wrote: [ -> ]This game would be more addictive it had music. I listen to music when i actually sit down to play, and get hooked for hours.

We should have Orb or Lamb create some funky tunes pokemon-like almost for the game.

Some for different maps and what the maps attitude could be

Like.. Creepy = Graveyard Map
Silent Night LOL = Night map xD

Funky sunny day = Sunny funky map.

Funky is a funky word xDDDDD

Er, right dei.

I see that we agree, although... I might not have said funky, I would have said Cool, or else Vivid, evoking, or intense.

But uh, I see we are of similar mind on the subject.

(2011-09-21, 07:33 PM)Nitz_X Wrote: [ -> ]Er, right dei.

I see that we agree, although... I might not have said funky, I would have said Cool, or else Vivid, evoking, or intense.

But uh, I see we are of similar mind on the subject.

I didn't literally mean funky. It just moves with the groove It goes with the flow.

so you want me to get instrumental tracks to lay over the maps?

(2011-09-21, 08:47 PM)orboknown Wrote: [ -> ]so you want me to get instrumental tracks to lay over the maps?

They have to be original.

then lamb would be better

(2011-09-22, 03:47 PM)orboknown Wrote: [ -> ]then lamb would be better

So... Am I going to get help or will I have to make it myself?

If lamb cant do it.