[Tobi-SoloX]

Fire was still in a battle between a Tyranoir.

Solord using a enormous Power of Dragon Blitz made Tyranoir mad.
"Why you little Weakling!" yelled Tyranoir. "Force Field!!"
Suddenly the field was blow with big wave airs.
"Can't Attack so I guess you have to retreat." Said Fire.
Fire called Solord in and sent out a Widour. Widour used his own Force Field and Broke the other one. Then Widour finished Tyranoir with a Shimmering Wind. Shimmering Wind got doubled with Force Field so it was Super Ultra strong.

"I now catch you" Fire said. "Fire!What had you been doing out here young man?!" Mom said. "Mom its commonsense" Fire said. "I've been training out here." "So Professor Rick has been looking for you." Mom said. "All the starters are gone now too."
"What!!!" Fire yelled. "Bu-Bu-Bu-But." So Fire and mom went home.
Lisa: Weakling old razor. Have a better move you little ones. You've been so useless ever since.
Fire: Who's that over there mom?
Mom: It's your rival Lisa.
Fire: What!!! She's so beautiful... But still she treats her monster mean she needs to respect them more.

Again Not Finish!!!

[SparrowHawk]

How many chapter ones are you going to make?!?!?!!

[Pein]

there probably different books

[Tobi-SoloX]

Alot don't care. *Blocks Dei's View*

Please be patient for it to be finished thank you.

Anyways ima make a different 1st chapter.

Different story though..

[Nitz_X]

You really should Publish things when they are complete. this feels like an awful commercial break that lasts for many, many days.