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my first adverticement
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Wink my first adverticement
see this-http://my.mmosite.com/97e856c4688ec24eb7...559b2.html
this has my first advertisement hope you enjoy .pleace help me to upgrade it.
09-17-2011 07:45 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
its actually good,well done my friend.
09-17-2011 11:42 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
nice job.you got the spelling of dark right.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
09-18-2011 01:15 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
(09-18-2011 01:15 AM)orboknown Wrote:  nice job.you got the spelling of dark right.
LMAO XD
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09-18-2011 01:19 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
tho he did fail at spelling darkness.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
09-18-2011 01:30 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
Yeah in the brackets it says (darckness)
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09-18-2011 01:31 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
its an improvement tho.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
09-18-2011 01:31 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
hmm....its pretty neat
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09-18-2011 02:47 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
(09-17-2011 07:45 PM)darckx Wrote:  Train your Pokemons and become a Top rated Pokemon trainer today!
that's the only thing i noticed that shouldn't be there other then that pretty good advertisement.
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Dont mess with the Samu or else you'll be left to rott in the Sanzu.
Credits go to SparrowHawk for the amazing sig.
09-18-2011 02:52 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
pretty good for a first
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09-18-2011 02:55 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
thanks .
09-18-2011 11:33 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
awesome ad darckx
09-19-2011 10:12 AM
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hey you got 4 stars dood.
09-19-2011 03:06 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
yes i know but thats off topic.
Likely Like Likey Likee
09-19-2011 03:08 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
hey see pm.
09-19-2011 03:13 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
Congratz on mod , also This add is good, but check up on your other 1 it doesn't have as much details.
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09-19-2011 07:41 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
yes it dont.i cant add much photos in it and die and some others have lready made their adds on it.
so it doesn't need more info.
09-19-2011 09:06 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
Gratz on modship.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
09-20-2011 03:40 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
see my second add.
http://www.onrpg.com/boards/newthread.ph...hread&f=36
09-20-2011 11:33 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
fail you have to login to see the thread
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Dont mess with the Samu or else you'll be left to rott in the Sanzu.
Credits go to SparrowHawk for the amazing sig.
09-20-2011 11:35 AM
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RE: my first adverticement
lol you have to have an account for that
[Image: Zelda.jpg]"Don't mess with Treason. Team Chrono~Private 1st Class
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RE: my first adverticement
sorry for the trouble.
here it is.
http://www.onrpg.com/boards/186758.html#post2641100
09-20-2011 02:58 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
well its not that bad
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09-20-2011 03:00 PM
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RE: my first adverticement
actually looking thru this,he repeated the same things like 10 different times. his grammar also wasnt that great.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
09-24-2011 12:36 AM
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