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grammar error
well this is a grammar error it should be "This move increases hit critical ratio (2x)" not "This move has increased hit critical hit ratio (2x)." thats like past tense meaning it has happened.[Image: inh5e1.png]
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08-17-2011 04:00 AM
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RE: grammar error
nice catch..
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
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RE: grammar error
right Big Grin
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RE: grammar error
Here is a small mis writting It should be "2 stages" not "2 stage".



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RE: grammar error
another nice catch.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
08-17-2011 05:27 AM
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RE: grammar error
I don't know if this one is correct or not but seems like it isn't and clearly makes no sense.

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RE: grammar error
"this move increased the critical hit ratio 4 times"?
that sound right?
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
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RE: grammar error
Its similar to the first one i found
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RE: grammar error
yea well..translating everything from turkish to english ANDmaking the game..we can excuse cefurkan his mistakes in the naunces of the english language
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
08-17-2011 05:47 AM
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RE: grammar error
"increased" should be replaced with "will"
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RE: grammar error
you mean will increase?
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
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08-17-2011 05:48 AM
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RE: grammar error
either way lol
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RE: grammar error
i was thinking it should be "This move increases hit critical ratio (4X)." like the first one
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RE: grammar error
cuz "this move will the" doesnt make sense Tongue
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
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Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
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RE: grammar error
there a spellin error to the error is wen you got to trade a monster it says put monters on trade instead of put monsters on trade
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RE: grammar error
thats been noted already zach -.-
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
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For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
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RE: grammar error
(08-17-2011 05:51 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote:  there a spellin error to the error is wen you got to trade a monster it says put monters on trade instead of put monsters on trade
This was reported a few days ago
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RE: grammar error
dangit Sad
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RE: grammar error
thanks anyways zach.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
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Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
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RE: grammar error
welcome Big Grin
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RE: grammar error
here i have another grammar error...it should be "beats up" not "beat up"



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RE: grammar error
Shouldn't it be "focuses" instead of "focused"...



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RE: grammar error
nice catches hello
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RE: grammar error
Thanks
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RE: grammar error
nice catches.but it should also be(in the first screenie)"which will also hurt the user"
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
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RE: grammar error
I guess
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