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grammar error
#1
well this is a grammar error it should be "This move increases hit critical ratio (2x)" not "This move has increased hit critical hit ratio (2x)." thats like past tense meaning it has happened.[Image: inh5e1.png]

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#2
nice catch..
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#3
right Big Grin
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#4
Here is a small mis writting It should be "2 stages" not "2 stage".



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#5
another nice catch.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#6
I don't know if this one is correct or not but seems like it isn't and clearly makes no sense.

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#7
"this move increased the critical hit ratio 4 times"?
that sound right?
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#8
Its similar to the first one i found

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#9
yea well..translating everything from turkish to english ANDmaking the game..we can excuse cefurkan his mistakes in the naunces of the english language
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#10
"increased" should be replaced with "will"
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#11
you mean will increase?
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#12
either way lol
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#13
i was thinking it should be "This move increases hit critical ratio (4X)." like the first one

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#14
cuz "this move will the" doesnt make sense :p
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#15
there a spellin error to the error is wen you got to trade a monster it says put monters on trade instead of put monsters on trade
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#16
thats been noted already zach -.-
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#17
(08-17-2011, 05:51 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote: there a spellin error to the error is wen you got to trade a monster it says put monters on trade instead of put monsters on trade
This was reported a few days ago


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#18
dangit Sad
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#19
thanks anyways zach.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#20
welcome Big Grin
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#21
here i have another grammar error...it should be "beats up" not "beat up"



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#22
Shouldn't it be "focuses" instead of "focused"...



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#23
nice catches hello
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#24
Thanks

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#25
nice catches.but it should also be(in the first screenie)"which will also hurt the user"
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#26
I guess

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