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~Wolfmii's redrawing CLOSED
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i will not be doing redraws anymore sorry! D:
i am not comfortable working with textures or under pressure.

it was nice being here though thank you!
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Hmm...Good..But It depends on your coloring skills that will make it usable.
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agree with Rock, Colors means alot! but great work though Smile
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(03-05-2012 09:24 PM)Lolzinator Wrote:  agree with Rock, Colors means alot! but great work though Smile
actually coloring is the 99% of the drawing Big Grin

now lets wait and see what she will be able to do Cool
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I like that coodra. Good job Big Grin
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YES i know the coloring is everything, so i will put my all~!
thank you very much for all your comments!
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Ahaha, I'm loving it! He's adorable. Look forward to seeing him finished.
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(03-06-2012 07:10 AM)Henrie Wrote:  Ahaha, I'm loving it! He's adorable. Look forward to seeing him finished.
thank you~
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the outline is so well done now just to see the colours
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RE: ~Wolfmii's redrawing attempts~
as they have said coloring is very crucial because it changes everything. infact you dont need to necessarily out line. anyway suggestion i would put to the redraw is add eyes under the eye-shield. many reason but the big picture is with jointed eye-shield it looks very cartoonist, plane and simple and most of the time thats why this monsters are being redrawn. ** ahem** furkan shoulda told me this was the problem **cough ** other then that good job...
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(03-06-2012 09:39 AM)Miyavi Wrote:  as they have said coloring is very crucial because it changes everything. infact you dont need to necessarily out line. anyway suggestion i would put to the redraw is add eyes under the eye-shield. many reason but the big picture is with jointed eye-shield it looks very cartoonist, plane and simple and most of the time thats why this monsters are being redrawn. ** ahem** furkan shoulda told me this was the problem **cough ** other then that good job...
yeah i know that i will try my best. actually iv done coloring without outline before and i think thats what ill do ^^
also im thinking of just making it with eyes. no eye shield thingy. furkan said i could do that so ill try it out and see. also because its the first evolution i picture them more "childish" so this one will be cute, but still realistic looking.

thank you very much for commenting, it means alot~!
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well cant wait to see final result Big Grin
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interesting take on the monster. I like it actually, excited to see what you will do with this!
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ahhh i'm excited to see what you do too :> you seem pretty good as it is, but if you need any help or anything feel free to ask :'D Though I doubt you'll need it
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(03-06-2012 01:51 PM)garbagekeeper Wrote:  ahhh i'm excited to see what you do too :> you seem pretty good as it is, but if you need any help or anything feel free to ask :'D Though I doubt you'll need it



thank you every one!

and thank you keeper~ if i run into something ill let you know ^^
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RE: ~Wolfmii's redrawing attempts~ need critics!
certainly not bad but need some more texture to become more realistic

but so far better than previous version Big Grin
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RE: ~Wolfmii's redrawing attempts~ need critics!
(03-06-2012 10:19 PM)CeFurkan Wrote:  certainly not bad but need some more texture to become more realistic

but so far better than previous version Big Grin
thank you~
and yes, im not done, just showing it off ^^
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Yea don't double post.
art is good thus far.
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Looking good \ouo/
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looks every good so far
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Very nice job. I like the changes with the blue tongue, lighter horns and having eyes instead of a visor. Looking forward to seeing the finished product.
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(03-07-2012 06:04 AM)orboknown Wrote:  Yea don't double post.
art is good thus far.
why cant i double post? sorry im new here, it be nice to know these things ^^;

other wise, thank you all of you~
anything i need to change?
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Add some texture o-o
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just a suggestion,could you maybe make the eyes yellow in the middle ? also you should make the visor look like its attached to its head,but can be moved on an off
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tell me what you think of these!
remember i encourage critics!

i took the suggestion above and also added texture.

tell me which you prefer and if the texture is good or not!

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(03-09-2012 10:19 AM)wolfmii Wrote:  tell me what you think of these!
remember i encourage critics!

i took the suggestion above and also added texture.

tell me which you prefer and if the texture is good or not!

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Saying it as 1 (upper left) 2 (upper right) 3 (lower left) 4 (lower right)

1. I like it.
2. Don't like the visor with eyes, maybe try making a visor with no eyes.
3. I don't think yellow eyes seem proper. It's just my opinion, I don't like it. I think it's better plain.
4. Opinion of #2 and #3.
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thank you!

i love the first one as well, but suggestions are helpfull as well ^^
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