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~Wolfmii's redrawing CLOSED
#1
Rainbow 
EDIT

i will not be doing redraws anymore sorry! D:
i am not comfortable working with textures or under pressure.

it was nice being here though thank you!
#2
Hmm...Good..But It depends on your coloring skills that will make it usable.
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#3
agree with Rock, Colors means alot! but great work though Smile
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#4
(03-05-2012, 09:24 PM)Lolzinator Wrote: agree with Rock, Colors means alot! but great work though Smile
actually coloring is the 99% of the drawing Big Grin

now lets wait and see what she will be able to do Cool
#5
I like that coodra. Good job Big Grin
#6
YES i know the coloring is everything, so i will put my all~!
thank you very much for all your comments!
#7
Ahaha, I'm loving it! He's adorable. Look forward to seeing him finished.
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#8
(03-06-2012, 07:10 AM)Henrie Wrote: Ahaha, I'm loving it! He's adorable. Look forward to seeing him finished.
thank you~
#9
the outline is so well done now just to see the colours
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#10
as they have said coloring is very crucial because it changes everything. infact you dont need to necessarily out line. anyway suggestion i would put to the redraw is add eyes under the eye-shield. many reason but the big picture is with jointed eye-shield it looks very cartoonist, plane and simple and most of the time thats why this monsters are being redrawn. ** ahem** furkan shoulda told me this was the problem **cough ** other then that good job...
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#11
(03-06-2012, 09:39 AM)Miyavi Wrote: as they have said coloring is very crucial because it changes everything. infact you dont need to necessarily out line. anyway suggestion i would put to the redraw is add eyes under the eye-shield. many reason but the big picture is with jointed eye-shield it looks very cartoonist, plane and simple and most of the time thats why this monsters are being redrawn. ** ahem** furkan shoulda told me this was the problem **cough ** other then that good job...
yeah i know that i will try my best. actually iv done coloring without outline before and i think thats what ill do ^^
also im thinking of just making it with eyes. no eye shield thingy. furkan said i could do that so ill try it out and see. also because its the first evolution i picture them more "childish" so this one will be cute, but still realistic looking.

thank you very much for commenting, it means alot~!


#13
interesting take on the monster. I like it actually, excited to see what you will do with this!
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#14
ahhh i'm excited to see what you do too :> you seem pretty good as it is, but if you need any help or anything feel free to ask :'D Though I doubt you'll need it
#15
(03-06-2012, 01:51 PM)garbagekeeper Wrote: ahhh i'm excited to see what you do too :> you seem pretty good as it is, but if you need any help or anything feel free to ask :'D Though I doubt you'll need it



thank you every one!

and thank you keeper~ if i run into something ill let you know ^^
#16
certainly not bad but need some more texture to become more realistic

but so far better than previous version Big Grin
#17
(03-06-2012, 10:19 PM)CeFurkan Wrote: certainly not bad but need some more texture to become more realistic

but so far better than previous version Big Grin
thank you~
and yes, im not done, just showing it off ^^
#18
TAKING A BREAK TOMORROW.
i need to clean my home, do laundry and such.
#19
Yea don't double post.
art is good thus far.
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If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#20
Looking good \ouo/
#21
looks every good so far
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#22
Very nice job. I like the changes with the blue tongue, lighter horns and having eyes instead of a visor. Looking forward to seeing the finished product.
#23
(03-07-2012, 06:04 AM)orboknown Wrote: Yea don't double post.
art is good thus far.
why cant i double post? sorry im new here, it be nice to know these things ^^;

other wise, thank you all of you~
anything i need to change?
#24
Read the global rules announcement. That contains all the rules for the site.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#25
Add some texture o-o
#26
Me Gusta Mucho ;w;
Your life just got better. 

You're welcome.

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#27
just a suggestion,could you maybe make the eyes yellow in the middle ? also you should make the visor look like its attached to its head,but can be moved on an off
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#28
tell me what you think of these!
remember i encourage critics!

i took the suggestion above and also added texture.

tell me which you prefer and if the texture is good or not!

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#29
(03-09-2012, 10:19 AM)wolfmii Wrote: tell me what you think of these!
remember i encourage critics!

i took the suggestion above and also added texture.

tell me which you prefer and if the texture is good or not!

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Saying it as 1 (upper left) 2 (upper right) 3 (lower left) 4 (lower right)

1. I like it.
2. Don't like the visor with eyes, maybe try making a visor with no eyes.
3. I don't think yellow eyes seem proper. It's just my opinion, I don't like it. I think it's better plain.
4. Opinion of #2 and #3.
#30
thank you!

i love the first one as well, but suggestions are helpfull as well ^^

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