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Version 1.1.2 TEST
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Version 1.1.2 TEST
Monster characteristics came. They are randomly assigned to the monsters. There might be grammar errors so please check them.

All current monsters characteristics randomly assigned.

This feature is just for fun. It has no impact on playability. Actually i added this feature since Garbagekeeper requested.

HTML: http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Monster_cha...istics.htm
Excel 2003 : http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Monster_cha...istics.xls

   
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
Epic monstermmorpg get better by the a hour
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Awesome
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
ncie update .
10-08-2012 12:50 AM
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(10-08-2012 12:48 AM)uchiha clan Wrote:  Epic monster mmorpg get better by the a hour
yes totally awesome
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
Looked at the move list, plz dont have powers with random numbers, like 24 or 35, makes them weak and looks funny.
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
Good, this one doesn't lag my computer. Checking for grammatical errors.

Honestly saying, grammar is pretty alright. There are only so few with very precise errors that it doesn't make much of a difference. If we can understand it, then it's fine.

Physical Traits

#18) They have a unusual eye color > They have an unusual eye color
("an" is used before words starting with vowels)

#34 - 41) ect. > etc.
(minor grammar issue)
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
(10-08-2012 01:07 AM)SparrowHawk Wrote:  Good, this one doesn't lag my computer. Checking for grammatical errors.

Honestly saying, grammar is pretty alright. There are only so few with very precise errors that it doesn't make much of a difference. If we can understand it, then it's fine.

Physical Traits

#18) They have a unusual eye color > They have an unusual eye color
("an" is used before words starting with vowels)

#34 - 41) ect. > etc.
(minor grammar issue)
It is prepared by GK so it is expected to be pretty good Big Grin
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
(10-08-2012 01:24 AM)CeFurkan Wrote:  
(10-08-2012 01:07 AM)SparrowHawk Wrote:  Good, this one doesn't lag my computer. Checking for grammatical errors.

Honestly saying, grammar is pretty alright. There are only so few with very precise errors that it doesn't make much of a difference. If we can understand it, then it's fine.

Physical Traits

#18) They have a unusual eye color > They have an unusual eye color
("an" is used before words starting with vowels)

#34 - 41) ect. > etc.
(minor grammar issue)
It is prepared by GK so it is expected to be pretty good Big Grin
Very nice cefurkan and gk(: also cefurkan i pm'd you an idea i hope will be accepted(:
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this is awesome
10-08-2012 01:56 AM
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
Gk comes up with the best suggestions Smile
They like to steal shoes....That is so me 0.o
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LOL. Characteristics are awesome *-*
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
I mark the errors in spelling/grammar with red...

Physical Trait: They have a very strong looking in build

Personality: They are advanturous and love to explore
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(10-08-2012 02:58 AM)Quanto_Konami Wrote:  I mark the errors in spelling/grammar with red...

Physical Trait: They have a very strong looking in build

Personality: They are advanturous and love to explore
Actually, a build means there body frame, putting "In" makes no sense.

Plus you spelled adventurous wrong.
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Dude I know what gk meant by build...and I'm saying that

"They have a very strong looking build" is grammatically correct while "They have a very strong looking in build" is not

Also adventurous is the correct spelling...that is why I marked the a in red...

Don't correct me if you do not know what you are talking about o.0

Personality:They are very couragous and strong
Should be courageous

Quirk:They have a tendancy to make loud noises at people
Tendency

Physical Trait:One eyes is a different color
eye...it should not be plural


Physical Trait:They look a little mangey

Should be mangy


man·gy/ˈmānjē/

Adjective:
  1. Having mange.
  2. In poor condition; shabby


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suggest should be suggests....a plural is needed there
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RE: Version 1.1.2 TEST
they love to eat <---i made that one <3 (:
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Nicely done, Cefurkan and GK
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@Qunanto ah, i admit i didn't read that well ^-^
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It's fine...I just dislike being corrected when I'm not wrong o.0
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I apologize for for grammar and spelling errors pfftftft. I... totally suck at it, which is sad since I only speak English. (Also doesn't help that sometimes I hit things wrong but Excel doesn't notify me that I happened to hit the wrong key ) But glad you guys are enjoying it!
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That's okay sierra...my friends call me the spellchecker in rl anyway Tongue

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Quirk:They groom excessivley
excessively

Btw I'm not even going through the list...just noting the errors as I catch monsters that have errors in their characteristics
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Sharp claw is a status type move with no effect?!
In matters of truth and justice, there is no difference between large and small problems.
For issues concerning the treatment of people are all the same.

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"solor valley" should be "solar valley"
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Nice update, there's barely any grammatical errors. Maybe I can look at the list now...

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They seem wiser than you could ever imagine, and they watch you with a incredible intelligence

I think it's more correct to say "This monster seems wiser than anyone could ever imagine, as they watch you with a incredible intelligence"
We don't really use "you," and use "anyone" if referring to a group of audience, and not speaking directly to them.

The characteristic describe the monster randomly, right? Then wouldn't a singular point of view is more appropriate? Since "they" would refer to a group of people, and we're only describing one monster. SO instead of "They...", I would prefer saying "This monster..."
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(10-08-2012 03:25 AM)Quanto_Konami Wrote:  Dude I know what gk meant by build...and I'm saying that

"They have a very strong looking build" is grammatically correct while "They have a very strong looking in build" is not

Also adventurous is the correct spelling...that is why I marked the a in red...

Don't correct me if you do not know what you are talking about o.0

Personality:They are very couragous and strong
Should be courageous

Quirk:They have a tendancy to make loud noises at people
Tendency

Physical Trait:One eyes is a different color
eye...it should not be plural


Physical Trait:They look a little mangey

Should be mangy


man·gy/ˈmānjē/

Adjective:
  1. Having mange.
  2. In poor condition; shabby


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suggest should be suggests....a plural is needed there
Quanto, you are incorrect in this case. In a plural form, the verb has no "-s", whereas in a singular form, it would have been "suggests."

The thing that gets me is the physical trait portion. It should be "were" not "where."
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Is this where we report errors? Anyways...are the boats in this area supposed to work (because they don't!)? Or has this already been addressed? I'll delete this if it has already been brought up...
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Shouldnt this be on version records? 0-0
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What i don't get, is why we have an Ad on our own game.
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