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Sting and Armor
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New commision! This time, it's pedraco and bararmor!

I plan to change their original species... so put in your thoughts and we'll see how they evolve!
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RE: Sting and Armor
Can you make barrarmor a cute little puppy, and mortone a fierce wolf! c:
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RE: Sting and Armor
Great Job, they look great, honestly.

You asked for opinion, here's mine for Dragur. It's really just the little things.

Dragur:

The head can face a better angel, the middle eye looks like a crazy eye
Is that lipstick?
the thing behind it's shoulder is weird, are they spikes? Dragood's looks better, maybe start it from it's elbow? It also doesn't need to be that oversize, the angle is also weird.
the rock-like bulges on it's body may look cooler if they were connected by something. 
The leg/foot angel and size doesn't match, I would presume the leg and foot on the right side would be bigger.
The base of the tail also seems too wide.
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RE: Sting and Armor
maybe keep the salamander/dragon for the first evo's and the flying lion/dog for the second one.
Both evo's look armored, so maybe you can use that concept too?
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RE: Sting and Armor
if you change th original species omg. I would love Armored Eagles! c:
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RE: Sting and Armor
(06-01-2014 07:21 AM)BambiTheMerciless Wrote:  Great Job, they look great, honestly.

You asked for opinion, here's mine for Dragur. It's really just the little things.

Dragur:

The head can face a better angel, the middle eye looks like a crazy eye
Is that lipstick?
the thing behind it's shoulder is weird, are they spikes? Dragood's looks better, maybe start it from it's elbow? It also doesn't need to be that oversize, the angle is also weird.
the rock-like bulges on it's body may look cooler if they were connected by something. 
The leg/foot angel and size doesn't match, I would presume the leg and foot on the right side would be bigger.
The base of the tail also seems too wide.

Hey there, thanks for your opinion...
Theseare originals... i am commisioned to rework it into something new.

I'll keep in mind what you say.

Meanwhile, what do you imagine this to be?
A new creature perhaps, as according to the elements?

@Santy, sure, i'll see about lion or dog Big Grin

@Zach Puppy seems like good choice!
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(06-01-2014 10:20 AM)zacherymatthews Wrote:  if you change th original species omg. I would love Armored Eagles! c:

Merp c;
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RE: Sting and Armor
sorry, i misunderstood.

For me, a physic dragon would remember more of the Asian dragon, or keep it similar Pedraco, but as it evolves, I imagine it to look more smooth than rough.

Rock dog, maybe a golem like texture that is dog shape.
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anything you do will turn out awesome
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@Bambi: That is kinda elaborate, Bambi. I like the dragon idea. 
I'll see about it.

@Vidyasagar: LOl, much too nice. Much feels. All fluffy
I'll do my best.
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Hey guys...drawing consciously. This is Dogaia. (Barrarmor)
[Image: barrarmor_by_sinnelius-d7m1ifn.jpg]
Nice to meet you.


Another one is Feruss. (Pedraco) Hiding...
They are both not so clean...as you can see. think you can identify their face? Should i show the face?
First stage of evolution. Drop some feedback! 

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@sinnelius. I like the second hiding one all the way!! I can't wait to see more Big Grin
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I love Ferrus! For the Pedraco line, I think you should stick to the dragon concept (KEEP THE WHISKERS), and make it mystical or even cosmic.
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They're both looking abit strangeeeee.
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(06-17-2014 04:48 PM)sinnelius Wrote:  [Image: dogaung_by_sinnelius-d7mpwfi.jpg]

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They're both looking abit strangeeeee.

thats a cool design but it kinda confuses me
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so predraco is hiding in the egg, eh? well, nicely drawn, but i kinda question how it can attack if its hiding in an egg...
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Predraco does have the advantage of being a Psychic type, after all.  I think...  If I remember right.  He might be less 'stuck in the shell' than 'using it as armor' until he's gotten bigger.  Kinda really digging the dog-turtle.  Tongue

On a related note, DEAR GOD, why would anything lay a POINTY EGG.   D8  Disbelief suspended, as it looks very, very cool, but poor momma.
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Oh you know... anime logic... symbolic and stuff...
And i had an idea that it is something like metapod...very tough and evasive, meanwhile getting
support skills that helps it persevere during various fights, but not so offensive on its own,
until its evolution.
As for the pointy egg.  
Momma gonna think twice before making another Pedraco.

And by the way, the new name will be Kaos.
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(06-18-2014 02:49 AM)Henrie Wrote:  On a related note, DEAR GOD, why would anything lay a POINTY EGG.   D8  Disbelief suspended, as it looks very, very cool, but poor momma.

Let's hope the pointy bits were soft when Mom laid that egg...
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Respectively, 
Dogaia to Dogaung.

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Woow amazing!
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Dogaung is sweet! I love the scenery on it's back; is that a sunrise/set or a moonrise/set?
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That dog is simply beautiful
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Dogaia evolving to Dogaung. 
I hope i entertained you, and kept the quality consistent.

Feedbacks are welcome for quality control!
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simply awsome
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how come i never noticed this amazing art work this is so awesome 
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BREATHTAKING!
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Thank you for the nice response!
Unfortunately, Cef didn't like them, so i will be scrapping them and redo it next week!

I will be keeping the original ideas intact... but...

Do you guys have any pokemons you love? I'd like to know more.
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(06-22-2014 01:45 AM)sinnelius Wrote:  Thank you for the nice response!
Unfortunately, Cef didn't like them, so i will be scrapping them and redo it next week!

I will be keeping the original ideas intact... but...

Do you guys have any pokemons you love? I'd like to know more.

Cef should use these in some capacity, even if it's not as an image replacement for a current monster. 

Not using them at all would be a mistake. 

These are absolutely beautiful.
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(06-22-2014 01:45 AM)sinnelius Wrote:  Thank you for the nice response!
Unfortunately, Cef didn't like them, so i will be scrapping them and redo it next week!

I will be keeping the original ideas intact... but...

Do you guys have any pokemons you love? I'd like to know more.

Didnt like them Huh They are beautiful and I don't think anyone don't like them. They are one of the most awesome monsters there are. Concept is good, drawing is good, coloring is good, nothing bad about it!

I'll talk Cef about this sinnelius..


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=> I did some questioning with friends and im telling you to help what the problem is.
Its maybe a small thing but maybe you should try to make the second one more badass. (like looking more evil for example in the face) he has really puppy eyes (when colored even more). Maybe if you work on the next monster, let it look more dangerous, more dark side, a dangerous stance, more like  a threat,....
I hope this helps and imo : I really love your art the most at the moment.
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