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RainbowSnoopy's Art
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RainbowSnoopy's Art
RainbowSnoopy here C:


I thought I'll post up some drawings. ^^ Doesn't matter how rude your critics are as long as it helps me to improve in my art skills. :3


Here's some monsters I made. Big Grin I didn't name them or gave them a type yet.

[Image: 2wclnyt.png]
Evolution One

I'll fix the other two later. I'm gonna focus on evo one more till it's finished. xD

[Image: 1581dfp.png]

Evolution Two
[Image: e0ip88.png]

Evolution Three
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11-14-2011 06:51 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Alright, time to review this.

I like the concept, but the monster does not fit with our, style?

it seems different, like mixing digimon with pokemon. it needs some touching up for sure, but it has potential, just needs to look more uniform before it is put in game.

Good drawing, but lacks visual uniformity.
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11-14-2011 07:06 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
I like it a lot. Very Talented.
As far as improving I think you could try some shading and clean up your lines a little bit. I agree-ish with Nitz that your design doesn't really match with the game, but neither does mine, so whatever. Just keep improving Smile. Good luck!
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Thanks for the comments guys. c:
I'll do my best to fix them. Big Grin
11-14-2011 07:23 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
I like the overall design. Good job.
11-14-2011 09:02 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Updated the first one. c:

yeeah, I'm gonna keep on fixing it till it comes to satisfaction. xD
Then I'll draw it in gimp and shade it. c:
11-14-2011 09:25 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
nice work
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11-14-2011 09:26 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Like the update. First one still needs shading and maybe a lighter grey for your base color so we can make out the mouth and oother lines? Also make your outlining lines thinner and I wouldnt lose the purple orb things around it like it had before. Smile Looks good.
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Updated
Thanks about the base color to a lighter color. I couldn't really tell cause of the laptop. *adjusts*
I was planning to shade after I get the design down, but I will shade if you want me to. c: As for the lines, that's the 2nd size. o3o The first size line I don't like very much. Kinda strains my eyes. x.x I mostly use it to make sprites. Scratch that. The lines are gonna be thin when the design is fine and I'm gonna redraw it in GIMP which I can actually scale the line.


Thanks Guider. C:
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
I lik dat cloud you got der.
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11-14-2011 10:19 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
I like it. (Says it like bugs bunny :3)

Hey, send me a pm on how to draw monstruos in Gimp s'il vous plait?
11-14-2011 10:23 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Love your Avatar Ghost Smile
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Thanks, i made it mah self >:3 Bwahahaha
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11-14-2011 10:27 AM
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Updated
And this time I drew with GIMP. :3
Cloud Orbs and shading will soon be added to it.

Thanks Ghost Big Grin

Thanks Dei. I can imagine that Bugs Bunny now. xD
Me send you a pm? :O
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
real nice, i like Smile
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
pretty good.
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Updated.

Shading will be added soon. :o In the meantime you guys know any good shading tutorials? x3

Thanks Genell and Orbok C:

Edit:
Shading added. Oh man, I'm not very good at shading. Bear with me here. xDD;
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
ask dawn or gk for help maybe?
and no prob RS(you are now rs.deal with it)
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
You are doing a great job shading and trust me when I say you will get better with practice.

If I were you I'd change up the face (eyes, snout) a little PM if you want a more detailed explanation. Smile

Good job.
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Updated.
I'll keep that in mind. Big Grin
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Thanks Knost :O
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
The snout is sooooo much better! I love the eyes but I would make them bigger and dont forget eyebrows for expression! You are definately improving, congrats!
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Updated.

Thanks Knost Big Grin I fixed the eyes, hopefully they're okay. :O
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Amazing! You take advice very well lol You are developing your skills nicely.
PM me anytime if you have any other questions!
BTW work on the orbs Smile
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
did you draw this on paint? it's pretty good.
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
Thanks so much Knost! CC:
I'll get started on that. >v>

Pj
Yeah I drew the last two on paint. The first one was drawn in GIMP.
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I started sketching the second evolution design. I ended up drawing two sketches.

[Image: 2aep05t.jpg]

[Image: bewsc8.jpg]

Sorry if you can't see e.e I'll outline them if you want me to.

Which one do you guys like best? :o

Edit:
Added something to the orbs on evolution one. I tried to making it look like their glowing xD
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
I like the second one.

You need to make sure it has more of a Monster look than a cat look Smile

Maybe instead of the grey in its fur you could have more of a glowing neon color to make it look more Monster-y. Just a thought.
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
I kinda lost interest on doing the other two evolutions today. xDD; and kinda make the first evo not look so much a cat. >>;
So I kinda went ahead and did fan art(?) and drew me and my starter pokemon, Pandark. xD

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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
You gotta call one Feeline. Like Feeling, you know with the hands... and it's a cat.....
EH?
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RE: RainbowSnoopy's Art
why even bump this?
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