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NijA The Grammar Nazi
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So, Ill just post what I find here.

1) (When trying to transform)

Wrong text:

Your monster could not transform because it has not reach required level 38 yet!

Suggestions:

Your monster could not transform because it has not reached the required level (38) yet!

Your monster could not transform because it has not reached the required level of 38 yet!

2) (When wanting to return to the market)

Wrong text:

Return the market

Suggestions:

Return to the market
I am no developper / programmer nor an artist / photoshopper

What I do have in turn is 15 years of experience with more or less any browser/client/pokemon - game that exists. I also do not speak english as my native language, however I think it is acceptable.

If anyone feels that he could use my help with anything, be it text, grammar, simple systems in games, new player experience or long term motivation concerning anything about this game, I will be willing to help him / her!

At first, let's revive this forum!

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