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New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
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Information New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
Ok people the main Maps page is done

http://monstermmorpg.deviantart.com/art/...-342697346

Now i need to design AllRoutes page

this page will have a lot of filters for routes
also it will be paginated
12-14-2012 08:46 AM
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Looks good
12-14-2012 08:56 AM
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RE: New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
current writing in italics


corrections in bold


Click Here To Make Detailed Search Among All Routes-Lots Of Filtering Available


Click Here To Make A Detailed Search Among All The Routes-There Are Lots Of Filtering Available


*will edit as i find errors*
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RE: New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
Are Anuverum Isles still going to be part of the region
What if all the Ancient Greek Sculptures are actually Victims of Medusa 0_0
12-14-2012 09:11 AM
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(12-14-2012 09:11 AM)Zerion Wrote:  Are Anuverum Isles still going to be part of the region
nope not any more
12-14-2012 09:44 AM
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Aw darn
What if all the Ancient Greek Sculptures are actually Victims of Medusa 0_0
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RE: New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
(12-14-2012 09:44 AM)CeFurkan Wrote:  
(12-14-2012 09:11 AM)Zerion Wrote:  Are Anuverum Isles still going to be part of the region
nope not any more
why not
12-14-2012 10:14 AM
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(12-14-2012 08:56 AM)Shadow11770 Wrote:  Looks good
It's just like connecting domino tiles . . . =(

How I wish we have a very decent world map like this . . .
Equira.
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Tracing the routes, how do they all connect together? Things start falling apart in the map 400 area. :x

Things are a bit disjointed, as Psywar mentioned. While this is a helpful tool, it needs polish.

Oh crap. I'm part of the polishing department, aren't I? ...Dangit. lol
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RE: New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
I find that these maps are set up as if they are one long path. They don't look very attractive on the new map page, but, I don't really have a problem with that, personally. As long as they function right, I guess.

I'm also disappointed to see the Averium islands go. They're pretty important to me for... I guess story stuff. Kind of like how you take your pokemon and name them and create character profiles and stuff, except, you don't really do anything with them. They're just kind of there, but important to you.
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Maybe we can remake the Averium Aisles and add it as an expansion. c: I did really like how those maps were laid out.
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RE: New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
(12-14-2012 08:59 AM)Guider456 Wrote:  current writing in italics


corrections in bold


Click Here To Make Detailed Search Among All Routes-Lots Of Filtering Available


Click Here To Make A Detailed Search Among All The Routes-There Are Lots Of Filtering Available


*will edit as i find errors*
Also,
These Values Are Calculated By The Routes Features That The Zone Containing > These Values Are Calculated By The Routes Features That The Zone Contains.


Click Here To See This Zone Full Size Image > Click Here To See This Zone's Full Size Image
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RE: New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
Suggested wording:

"Map Values Are Calculated From The Route Features Within Each Zone"

"Click Here To See Zone Details"

"Click Here To See Full-Sized Zone Image"

Suggestion for the blank space in each zone details area:

"Total NPC's:"
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i say nice
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(12-14-2012 01:06 PM)Henrie Wrote:  Maybe we can remake the Averium Aisles and add it as an expansion. c: I did really like how those maps were laid out.
yes this is very possible

also at this gallery you can see zone maps bigger sizes

http://monstermmorpg.deviantart.com/gallery/41092208
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this is very nice Big Grin
12-15-2012 06:13 AM
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RE: New Maps page design - please comment and fix grammar
Grammar Fixes

"Click here to make detailed search among all routes - Lots of filtering available"
Should be: "Click here to filter your search among all routes."
Why? It's a bit shorter because I integrated the "lots of filtering" into the main sentence.

"These values are calculated by the routes features that the zone containing"
Should be: "These values are calculated by the route features that the zone contains."
Why? Usage of plural nouns and verb conjugation is a bit off, namely in "routes" and "containing."

"Click on zone map thumbnail images to see that zone detailed"
Should be: "Click on zone map thumbnail images to see details"
Why? The original sentence sounds pretty good, but "zone detailed" doesn't sound right to me.

"Click here to see this zone full size image"
Should be: "Click here to see this zone's full size image"
Why? Missing a possessive suffix in "zone"

Other than a few grammar errors (that are bound to pop up with you translating by yourself), the maps are excellent, and I'm excited to get out of the Normal zone in the test server. Keep it up! Big Grin
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looks fine
12-17-2012 12:10 PM
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Any new Updates yet? :c
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(12-17-2012 12:58 PM)Danny Wrote:  Any new Updates yet? :c
working on it right now
probably tomorrow on test server
12-19-2012 10:09 AM
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