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Monsters That Need to be Re-Drawn
#1
Have a monster you feel needs to be re-drawn? Is the pose wonky? The design flawed? The overall art just not that fantastic? Post it here!
When giving the suggestion, please follow this short form:
Monster's Name/Number:
Original Artist:
Reason WHY you think this monster needs to be redrawn:
Suggestions/Comments:
Please don't start arguments like "I don't think that monster needs to be re-drawn/ don't you dare re-draw that monster"
-Thanks!
#2
Wink you knwo my reason's
Beta Name : Mystic_Mimic
Alpha name : Misdreavus

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#3
thats a waste of a post mis.
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#4
Good luck Big Grin.
#5
dont bump threads like this.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#6
Monsters Name : Piraid #437
Original Artist : GK
Reason : It just doesn't look.. as detailed. It looks rushed and a little to bleh
Suggestions : Change the end of his tail to a hook almost. Make his head bigger. More details!

http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Piraid-Monster-Dex-437


#7
(12-05-2011, 01:27 AM)Deidara Wrote: Monsters Name : Piraid #437
Original Artist : GK
Reason : It just doesn't look.. as detailed. It looks rushed and a little to bleh
Suggestions : Change the end of his tail to a hook almost. Make his head bigger. More details!

http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Piraid-Monster-Dex-437
I'd like to add on to this.
Perhaps use a different flag, pick a cool on that on of the big name pirates had.
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#8

My challenge to you (artists)

Monsters Name : Loveen
Original Artist : Sorry no ideia
Reason : Try to make this monster cutter than it is with the new drawing style
Suggestions : Maybe you could paint her sideways running, with some kind of lovish aura and give it wolf fangs and paws
#9
With the awesome Henrie's work, a lot of monsters need to be re-drawn. Here, one among others :
Monster Name : Cutree
Original Artist : Garbagekeeper
Reason : too simplist (not enough details), too round, ...
Suggestions : less round and with more details (beautiful leaves, ...)
#10
zonech
original artist:no clue
reason:need to be more detailed
#11
(05-13-2012, 12:26 PM)Ruin Wrote: zonech

original artist:no clue

reason:need to be more detailed
He's been redrawn already...don't wanna lose that beautiful new one. Like what happened to Ruffial...
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#12
Monster: Armoron #374
Artist: N/A
Reason for re-draw: It looks rushed, not that much detail on its shell, feet or tail and i think his head it too circular. Overall he doesn't really look like any type of reptile.

Suggestion: In my opinion, It should look more like a tortoise (ex. Aldabra Giant Tortoise) with a steel shell and even some spines on it's tail for decoration. Also I think its species type should be changed to Steel Shell/ Steel Hide instead of "Hidden" because it makes him sound more protective other than wimpy.


Monster:
http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Armoron-Monster-Dex-374

Aldabra Giant Tortoise:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:A._gig...rtoise.jpg

Monster: Reptiron #375
Artist: N/A
Reason for re-drawing: Looks rushed and needs more detail. It's legs and arms and not symmetrical (he actually doesn't have legs just feet).
Suggestion: The shell should be one piece because it makes no sense to split it up (looks like a two piece bikini lol) for ex. but not exactly because that would be copying like Blastoise and add some type or detailed pattern to the shell. The color of it's shell should be the same as Armoron (keep the yellow stripes it stands out more) compared to all the grays on him. Lastly, the bubble on it's cheek needs to go and head remodeled should be a little bigger and shorter neck.


Monster:
http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Reptiron-Monster-Dex-375
Detailed pattern for shell:
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§io...e#/d15uk7l
#13
PS : my English bad, wish u understand Big Grin

Monster's Name/Number:  #10008 Giga-Vulragon
Original Artist:  robertfiddler
Reason WHY you think this monster needs to be redrawn:    shape/color same as #1515 Vulragon . obvious. original and evolution have similar shape.
Suggestions/Comments:

Vulragon  is 1st monster -> evolution -> Giga Vulragon better have spark side . Please give this Giga- Vulragon more LOVE Heart .
Suggestion for Giga type :
  • add some dragon shape, add little more wide shoulder wing ( bigger body)
  • add some lightning spark aura .. its normal type so .. how about orange little bit at horn mybe  + yellow (dragon main color)( not to much yellow spark ~ not electric)
  • change the eyes , more scary or white l
  • add more long claws
  • make horn bigger .. its Giga . Smile 
  • ori / basic color:  yellow - orange - white -> Giga : dark orange, brighter yellow, orange horn, white mix
#14
(05-23-2015, 10:06 PM)OrangeStar Wrote: PS : my English bad, wish u understand Big Grin

Monster's Name/Number:  #10008 Giga-Vulragon
Original Artist:  robertfiddler
Reason WHY you think this monster needs to be redrawn:    shape/color same as #1515 Vulragon . obvious. original and evolution have similar shape.
Suggestions/Comments:

Vulragon  is 1st monster -> evolution -> Giga Vulragon better have spark side . Please give this Giga- Vulragon more LOVE Heart .
Suggestion for Giga type :
  • add some dragon shape, add little more wide shoulder wing ( bigger body)
  • add some lightning spark aura .. its normal type so .. how about orange little bit at horn mybe  + yellow (dragon main color)( not to much yellow spark ~ not electric)
  • change the eyes , more scary or white l
  • add more long claws
  • make horn bigger .. its Giga . Smile 
  • ori / basic color:  yellow - orange - white -> Giga : dark orange, brighter yellow, orange horn, white mix

you should contact her on deviantart i dont think so she checks here anymore

http://nebulafrog.deviantart.com/

http://garbagekeeper.deviantart.com/

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