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Just a start with a rough draft
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Just a start with a rough draft
I wanna write a new monster fanfiction now :O

So, I'm going to post some ideas for it. Basically, this is rough draft. Gonna throw little people characters with hardly information :o

Main Characters
Johiro (M) - Yokelby
Troy (M) - Bulkaff
December (F) - Impoz

^These 3 are all rivals.

Arianna (F) - Cautant
Zayden (M) - Lizaur

^Traveling buddies?


Evil Characters
Organization - Team Night Fear
-Main people
Callaway (M) - Veroceti and Barnacold
Scarlet (F) - Toodro and Whispon

Minor Characters
Ancient Sages
Nurse Vera
Officer Alice


Character Descriptions

Johiro

Troy
A guy that favors traveling alone. He wants only strong monsters and he knows that to get what he wants, he has to work hard for it. He has a bit of a rivalry with Johiro. His main goal to gather the strongest monsters and take down Johiro, ultimately defeating him. His main partner is Bulkaff (will evolve). Troy is able to handle himself quite well. He keeps his emotions intact, not letting them get the best of his actions.

December



Beginning : Starfall Town - Morning
Johiro, Troy, and December finally turned 12 and passed the Starfall Trainers Academy to become Monster Trainers. They all get their starter monsters and travel together for a few maps until they reach their first town before going their separate ways.

The story focuses on Johiro, he is the main main character. Troy and December will appear a lot in the story. Introductions for Arianna and Zayden will be coming soon.[/u][/u]
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09-08-2012 06:56 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
O: i wanna join in,what must i do ?
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
those names are different for sure lol
09-08-2012 06:58 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
Hmm.. maybe you the people can post some minor characters? :O

make up your ancient sages, random trainers, bla bla ;O

Ancient Sages are... limited to 1 zenith. Make teams of 6, I may reduce some :O

I'll work on this bit by bit.. it's just that I want to do another fanfic.
09-08-2012 07:02 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
i want to be a ancient sage,ill add description after i pvp muhammet

imma be a ancient sage .-.

Team: Wall yetee
Hallu wiskcle
Wall axotogol
Hallu simoly
Wall terrarth
Wall solord
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09-08-2012 07:04 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
i want to be a random trainer what must a random trainer have in his/her team?
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09-08-2012 12:03 PM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
Random trainers cannot have zenith/legend/ancient or a fully evolve team.
09-08-2012 12:04 PM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
At one point he should face a mysterious trainer that whoops his but with just a titanine Dodgy Titanine FTW
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
Ok then my team is this:



Nekitten lvl 20 nickname:kitty
Pandrive lvl 45 nickname:panda
Larvitle lvl 24 nickname:iron
Dualit lvl 38 nickname:dual
Monon lvl 30 nickname:hydra
Sealake lvl 35 nickname:sea

Lol the nicknames are so funny but I like them and please use the nicknames =3 oh and do I need like more info or is that like enough already? And is it ok if I have more than one starter cuz if I can't have more than one starter then I'll just update my team =3
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09-08-2012 02:40 PM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
(09-08-2012 02:40 PM)icyaquapiplup Wrote:  Ok then my team is this:



Nekitten lvl 20 nickname:kitty
Pandrive lvl 45 nickname:panda
Larvitle lvl 24 nickname:iron
Dualit lvl 38 nickname:dual
Monon lvl 30 nickname:hydra
Sealake lvl 35 nickname:sea

Lol the nicknames are so funny but I like them and please use the nicknames =3 oh and do I need like more info or is that like enough already? And is it ok if I have more than one starter cuz if I can't have more than one starter then I'll just update my team =3
Really, panda? xD
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09-09-2012 02:44 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
ikr lol but i love it even tho its ridiculous X'D
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09-09-2012 03:01 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
I would support this, but ive already been let down by the monster manga, sorry
09-09-2012 03:15 AM
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iWant to be a the last person in the elite four type of guy or a main character :b
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09-09-2012 03:17 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
minor character: how about some professors or rangers?
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09-09-2012 11:46 AM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
ours shouldnt be called elite, since its [nintendo]

maybe omega?

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omega 6
omega 4
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
(09-09-2012 03:15 AM)night phoenix Wrote:  I would support this, but ive already been let down by the monster manga, sorry
It's a FANFICTION, not a manga Tongue No need to support, just let your creativity flow and write new stories Big Grin
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
Traveling buddy:
Drakan(M)
Selena(F)
09-09-2012 12:09 PM
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RE: Just a start with a rough draft
[Image: 010_Yokelby.png] This is Yolkelby for those who don't know. He is my main character's partner.


[Image: 013_Bulkaff.png] This is Troy's partner, Bulkaff. Looks quite tough right? Well, Troy goes for the monsters that look strong and especially the ones that are strong enough to defeat Johiro. Information on their relationship will be given in the story.



[Image: 019_Impoz.png] Impoz, December's partner. She's a girl and she thinks Impoz is cute, so she chose it :o
09-11-2012 05:15 AM
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