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#1
Being the first thing new players may see, it'd be better to fix it ASAP.


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Should be prevention and integrated.




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Click here to go to the game page.

I'll check more later.
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#2
Ahaha I've never really paid that much attention to those screens tbh... Keen eye there Snot Wink Hopefully Cef sees this soon (easy fix)
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#3
preventation Tongue sounds menacing
#4
Good eyes
#5
Here are some more.

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"Mouse hover to see info" is understandable, but why not make it "Hover your mouse to show info(or info menu)".
"Move through door to enter inside" is kinda redundant.


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All of these should be "to go to"


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It should be keys instead of buttons.
1 isn't needed, "every click" is enough.
"For fluent..." isn't needed either, as you already stated above that you can hold the "buttons" for continuous movement.

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"IV values" is redundant, as it means "individual values values".
You cannot see IV's or abilities at the battle page, you need to go to the monster details page.
IV is the most used-non official name for the hidden values for pokemon stats, i've never seen anyone asking for, or raising full UV pokemon.

I'll check more later, and i don't do this to make fun or to upset anyone, i just want to help, and if i sound rude, keep in mind that english isn't my first language.
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#6
Good job man
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#7
As far as I can tell this is just a simple gap in grammar due to translation error.
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@Nitz_X u really should leave this game
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#8
How do u keep finding all these stuffUndecided
#10
If anyone wants to take it from here, i won't stop you, anyways, it seems like it won't be fixed soon.
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#11
@tons_o_snot

Well, Cefurkan isn't fluent in english, and he's from Turkey. It's no surprise that he's miserable when it comes to these things. Smile

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