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Front page Transformation grammar
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Front page Transformation grammar
[Image: Transform-Result.png]
I think it should be something like this(the black text):
After clicking transform monster on the my team page you will see the result at the bottom.
(This post was last modified: 09-07-2013 07:45 PM by Trip.)
09-07-2013 09:34 AM
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RE: Front page Transformation grammar
(09-07-2013 09:34 AM)Trip Wrote:  [Image: Transform-Result.png]
I think it should be something like this:
After clicking transform monster on the my team page you will see the result at the bottom.

I'm not exactly sure what you mean here Trip... Confused Although, the only grammar errors I can see in the text are trivial.

It could be changed to:
"Your monster could not transform because it has not yet reached the required level of 62!"
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09-07-2013 11:49 AM
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RE: Front page Transformation grammar
Pretty sure he's talking about the text velow that.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
09-07-2013 01:59 PM
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RE: Front page Transformation grammar
(09-07-2013 01:59 PM)orboknown Wrote:  Pretty sure he's talking about the text velow that.

Ah I see... didn't realise that was a part of it due to the different style of text O_O... In that case then yeah, I agree with Trip
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09-07-2013 02:07 PM
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RE: Front page Transformation grammar
(09-07-2013 02:07 PM)Pyro Piglet Wrote:  
(09-07-2013 01:59 PM)orboknown Wrote:  Pretty sure he's talking about the text velow that.

Ah I see... didn't realise that was a part of it due to the different style of text O_O... In that case then yeah, I agree with Trip

i think that picture is on the home page, and there the black text is like that Smile
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09-07-2013 05:09 PM
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