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Fan Blog-critique
#1
Okay, here is the [not so official] blog
http://monstermmorpgofficial.blogspot.com/
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#2
You should've capitalized RPG.
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#3
"official MonsterMMOrpg official blog". Use "official" once.
#4
Can I fix the errors?
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#5
(10-14-2012, 01:22 PM)SparrowHawk Wrote: "official MonsterMMOrpg official blog". Use "official" once.
I only used it once

(10-14-2012, 01:28 PM)Ashenator Wrote: Can I fix the errors?
Yes you can, but you may not Big Grin
(troublesome verbs lol)

So.. Is it legit?
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#6
Great work fj *A*
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#7
updated, with images on the game
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#8
(10-14-2012, 01:36 PM)fjkulit Wrote:
(10-14-2012, 01:22 PM)SparrowHawk Wrote: "official MonsterMMOrpg official blog". Use "official" once.

I only used it once
No, read your own work and make sure it is clean of errors BEFORE posting and advertising it.

You used it twice btw.
#9
(10-15-2012, 12:35 AM)SparrowHawk Wrote:
(10-14-2012, 01:36 PM)fjkulit Wrote:
(10-14-2012, 01:22 PM)SparrowHawk Wrote: "official MonsterMMOrpg official blog". Use "official" once.

I only used it once
No, read your own work and make sure it is clean of errors BEFORE posting and advertising it.

You used it twice btw.
i didn't see anything like that
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#10
Quote:Welcome to the official MonsterMMORPG official blog!


this is what dei was talking about ^ and yeah should fix some errors first else it wont be a proper blog Wink
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#11
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+ I'm deleting your new thread. You cannot post those characters in a thread name or else the thread will become invalid and inaccessible. Use regular text.
#12
SORRY FOR LETTING you guys down i did my best ;-;

changed
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#13
Look the whole thing over, change the background as well so the text and links can be legible. It's a good background, but people will stare at the monster instead of reading.

If it's good, I'll give you a lollipop for Halloween.
#14
LEMME change backround color

changed to another color
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#15
people are respectable, not respectible. :S
#16
seems good but I saw some errors that I'll report later
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#17
(10-15-2012, 06:20 AM)Pein Wrote: seems good but I saw some errors that I'll report later
why not let fj find them first so he could fix them? Tongue
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#18
Put corrections here :p
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#19
3rd Bullet Point- If you like or love Pokemon...
6th Bullet Point- .....monstercenter ---> Monster Center
9th Bullet Point- .....monsterdex ---> MonsterDex
15th Bullet Point- Don't put yet that we have 4 Evolution Monsters.
33rd Bullet Point- SparrowHawk-.....respectable
34th Bullet Point- Guider-.....respectable
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#20
Thank you! I changed it now Smile

The update is near.. Just put the 4th evo.. XD
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#21
Portrayed as a nerd 0.o

SOME MEMBERS OF THE FORUM CORRECTIONS:

- It is a browser game, so there is no need to download anything!

And really, work on your capitalization .-.

- Freak500 (Lead Moderator)- Although he just donated to become a lead moderator, he is a good moderator. He is kind of inactive these months.

- Guider456 (Super Moderator)- Probably one of the "best" moderator in the forum and in-game, you can usually find him in Crow Woods hunting Spiralaxy. He usually lurks in chat, and only comes out when it is needed to. PM him if you have questions.


Punctuations...

- Orboknown (Super Moderator)- One of the favorite moderators, he always moderates his section. You were warned.

- Garbagekeeper (Art Designer)- SHE is one of our monster designers and artists. She was a pioneer in drawing these monsters. She was one of the first monster artist.

- Dark.Zero (Moderator)- He came from London. He is very silent, Like a ninja. You won't know he is already staring at you.

- Ashenator (Player)- This person has been playing the game for quite a long time. He is known as Muytr. He is quite helpful, and he is very nice to chat with. Sadly, he is only on rarely and usually leaves fast.


Welcome to MonsterMMORPG official blog! corrections

Maybe put the 4th evo this way:

- Unlike pokemon, here we will have 4th evolution monsters!

- We sometimes have a bonus weekend event where you may gain more experience points to level up your monsters, and more gold to buy more items!

- More than 520 maps will be released, each with their own awesome monsters, and unique features

- NPCs, or Non-Playable Characters for short. They can be battled for exp and gold. They will be added in the future.




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- Ramza Beoulve
#22
You are one heck of a nerd 0-0
I didn't regret what i said XD
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may someone put this on general discussions? Thanks

So, is this blog the official one?
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#23
Alright, well this is more of a "hey this is MonsterMMORPG check this out it's a cool game" than an official MonsterMMORPG blog. An official MonsterMMORPG blog would be run only by CeFurkan and the rest of the development team, and would basically serve as a development blog, being updated as new things are added to the game and stuff. So to answer your question of whether this is an official blog, well, no it isn't. It's more of a fan blog. Smile

Edit: Also SparrowHawk may I have some lollipops and cookies? Big Grin
#24
(10-16-2012, 11:27 AM)Lamb Wrote: Alright, well this is more of a "hey this is MonsterMMORPG check this out it's a cool game" than an official MonsterMMORPG blog. An official MonsterMMORPG blog would be run only by CeFurkan and the rest of the development team, and would basically serve as a development blog, being updated as new things are added to the game and stuff. So to answer your question of whether this is an official blog, well, no it isn't. It's more of a fan blog. Smile

Edit: Also SparrowHawk may I have some lollipops and cookies? Big Grin
You actually deserve lollipops and cookies. I agree with you on the "official vs fan" blog. It was turning into a forum kinda thing :/

At first, CeFurkan wanted a blog, but he gave us a forum because we like forum. If he wants a blog, he could ask someone to make it for him directly under his supervision, do it himself, or bla bla.
#25
Well then.. Fan blog it is LAWL
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#26
'Zacherymatthews
(Player)- A player that has been playing the game for so long. He is
most of the time online in the forum, but just hidden (This will give
you a hint that you should PM me instead)
'

Tbh i think you should remove that, it isn't needed and people can already guess about you.
#27
I made that as a joke.. If you know what i mean
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#28
Quote: Orboknown (Super Moderator)- One of the favorite moderators, he always moderates his sections. You were warned.
I moderate the whole forum-.-
and I have more than one sectional modship.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.
#29
Joking on something that had the intention of being "official"?

Yea.. that says a lot :/
#30
thread op/title now much more accurate.
Quote: Do you hear the Whisper Men The Whisper Men are near
If you hear the Whisper Men then turn away your ears
Do not hear the Whisper Men whatever else you do
For once you've heard the Whisper Men they'll stop. And look at you.

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