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CeFurkan Wrote:once more update . added 3 more line

Well we don't have to really teach them how to play the game in the ad, that's more along the lines of something that belongs on the site. Which, it is on the site, when you hover your cursor on the arrow buttons. I think short and sweet is the effective way to go, which is why I coded all the URLs nicely in my edit for you so that the URL and description of what's being linked is one bundle.

I don't really think it's effective to smash potential players with a wall of text.
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CeFurkan Wrote:once more update . added 3 more line

Well we don't have to really teach them how to play the game in the ad, that's more along the lines of something that belongs on the site. Which, it is on the site, when you hover your cursor on the arrow buttons. I think short and sweet is the effective way to go, which is why I coded all the URLs nicely in my edit for you so that the URL and description of what's being linked is one bundle.

I don't really think it's effective to smash potential players with a wall of text.
but then i am seeing as a reply walking is too laggy Smile people try to move with arrow buttons and it is slow. they are for multiple step

we really need that lines so modify that way Smile
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modified first sentence. top 3 contributors will get a legendary reward full uv any nature they want
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i was almost done with modifying it but i accidentally closed out of it Sad but i'll get right back on it i guess *sigh*
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CeFurkan Wrote:but then i am seeing as a reply walking is too laggy Smile people try to move with arrow buttons and it is slow. they are for multiple step

we really need that lines so modify that way Smile
  • MonsterMMORPG has a strict policy against cheating. Because of this very reason MonsterMMORPG is taking every possible precaution such as checking every action at server side, having in game integrated security image question after a certain number of actions.
  • MonsterMMORPG is also trying to maintain content acceptable for every age group so parents can safely allow their children to play.
  • MonsterMMORPG has a very strong and reliable server, so you can play the game anytime, anywhere without lag.
  • MonsterMMORPG has awesomely designed game mechanics. The Monsters' Moves have tons of great effects such as "bleeding", "multiple hit", "2 turn moves", "burning", "crippling" and many more.
  • MonsterMMORPG has 100 different natures which makes Monsters even more different.
  • MonsterMMORPG uses a Unique Values system which is determined when a Wild Monster is caught which makes each monster statistically unique.
  • MonsterMMORPG includes a Training Points system which lets users specialize in certain stats and helps make each Monster even MORE their own.
  • MonsterMMORPG doesn't require you to click to navigate maps like most traditional browser games; instead, use w, a, s, d or your arrow keys to save yourself some clicking. If you want to cover large distances quickly, the in-game button can be set to move up to nine steps per one click.
I added the bolded text to the code in my other post so that we tell them about it while also making it seem like a nifty feature. It's better than just shoving it randomly into the end of the ad. My way is two birds, one stone :'D
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Hello people. With this article, on behalf of the fellow gamers of MonsterMMORPG, I would like to present to you a new twist on [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com]Pokemon[/url], complete with never before seen Monsters and a real [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Register]MMORPG[/url]-feel. This game is truly free to play, forever. It isn't a fan made Pokemon game, so you can be sure it's different from Pokemon in all the correct ways. The most important thing among these ways is that it cannot be closed by Nintendo like other [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Pokemon-Games]Pokemon Games[/url] out there because we don't use any of Nintendo's Trademarked and Copyrighted material.
  

Now let's talk about some of the main components of MonsterMMORPG. This game  at its core  is about Monsters,making it only similar to Pokemon, but still different in many ways. You are exploring professionally designed [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Maps]Maps[/url] (there are currently 83) and trying to obtain Monsters. You have to battle them and catch them before they can be tame enough to be trained. You will not only be battling wild Monsters but also you can battle a [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Monsterdex]Monster[/url] team made by one of your friends. Yes, that means we have a working PvP system. To give you a small idea about how advanced the battling system really is : it contains 13,000 lines of code! MonsterMMORPG also has an integrated chat system coded specifically for the game, so while playing the game,  you can also chat with your fellow players. It supports a total of 32 different languages, so you can chat with players from around the world.


- At this point you are probably wondering what this game looks like and how to play it.  - This is the game's main page : [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com]MonsterMMORPG[/url]  - This is the official game videos page : [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Videos] MonsterMMORPG Videos[/url]. If you watch the game videos, you will get to know everything there is to know about the main things of MonsterMMORPG.   - The game screenshots can be found here : [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Screenshots]MonsterMMORPG Screenshots[/url].  - If you want to advertise, we have awesome banners for you : [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Banners]MonsterMMORPG Banners[/url].   - When you're ready to register, go here : [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Register] Game Registration Page[/url]   - This links you to the list of Monsters currently in-game : [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Monsterdex[url] We have a huge collection of monsters, even more then Pokemon has.   - For our official Youtube, Twitter, and Facebook channels, go here and subscribe :   [url=http://www.youtube.com/user/MonsterMMORPG]MonsterMMORPG on Youtube[/url],  [url=http://twitter.com/MonsterMMORPG]MonsterMMORPG on Twitter[/url],  [url=http://www.facebook.com/MonsterMMORPG]MonsterMMORPG on Facebook[/url].
  

If you haven't already taken a peek at our unique features for yourself, we'll lay down the basics :
  * MonsterMMORPG has a strict policy against cheating. With this very reason MonsterMMORPG is taking every possible precaution such as checking every action at server side, having in-game integrated security image questions after a certain number of actions.   * MonsterMMORPG is also trying to maintain content acceptable for every age group so parents can safely allow their children to play this wonderful game.  * MonsterMMORPG has a very strong and reliable server, so you can play the game anytime, anywhere without any lagging issues.   * MonsterMMORPG has amazingly designed game mechanics. The Monsters' moves have tons of great effects such as "bleeding", "multiple hit", "2 turn moves", "burning", "crippling" and a whole lot more.  * MonsterMMORPG has 100 different natures which makes Monsters even more intriguing and different.  * MonsterMMORPG uses a UV(Unique Values) system which is determined when a wild Monster is caught, which makes Monsters,statically, even more unique then they were before.   * MonsterMMORPG also includes a TP(Training Points) system which lets users specialize in certain stats and helps make each Monster even [i]more[/i] their own.
  

That hardly even scratches the surface. If you want to know anything else about the game, play it to your heart's content.
  

We strongly suggest you to watch our tutorial videos while playing the game. Latest tutorial videos always can be found here : [url=http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL89772D2A75FC43B3]Monster MMORPG Tutorial Videos Playlist On Youtube[/url]
[b]Very Important Notices : 1- For walking on the map use either w,a,s,d or arrow keys on the keyboard. Keep pressing them for smooth moving.Also you can change the numbers in the box from 1-9 for faster moving to getting to a certain location. 2- Game works best on Firefox latest version or Google Chrome latest version[/b]


As a matter of fact, here we'll let the game speak for itself. Please click on images to see them in full size.


Now that we have the game covered we also have an amazing forum for you to talk on : [url= http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/index.php]MonsterMMORPG Forum[/url]


We cover everything in the game on the forum and we have other things like announcements, version records,faq,rules,general discussions,introductions and farewells,teams,tournaments,off-topic discussions, and I can't tell you all the rest, you have to come see it for yourself.


If you want to get into the conversations on the forum, first you have to register : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/member.php?action=register]Forum Registration Page[/url]


After you're all registered and you're logged in, if you want to you can introduce yourself either in this section : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-Introductions-and-Farewells]Introductions and Farewells[/url] or in this thread : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Thread-Introduce-Yourself-new-players]Introduce Yourself[/url], whichever one is more comfortable to you, you can do either 1 if you want to introduce yourself.
  

We also have an Announcements section for keeping up to the latest things happening in the game : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-Announcements]Announcements[/url]


We also keep track of the version numbers here in this section : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-Version-Records]Version Records[/url]
Here is 1 of the most important updates for this game : http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Thread-Version-Beta-1-0-0-Very-Important-Update-Read]Version Beta 1.0.0[/url].

We also have an FAQ section to answer some of your questions : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-FAQ]FAQ[/url]

We have a rules section as well for those who want to be sure to not get banned from this awesome game : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-Rules]Rules[/url]

If you want to start a game-related discussion go here : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-General-Discussions]General Discussions[/url].

We also have a big thing for teams here on MonsterMMORPG, here's the link to the section of teams : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-Clans-Guilds-Teamwork]Teams[/url].

With the PvP system we have on the game, we also have tournaments starting to spring up everywhere. Here is the link for the section to it : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-Tournaments-Competitions]Tournaments[/url]

We also have a huge Off-Topic section for people to discuss things not related to the game. Here is the link : [url=http://forum.monstermmorpg.com/Forum-Off-Topic-Discussions]Off-Topic Section[/url]

As i said earlier if you want the full experience of MonsterMMORPG register on the game and forum. We have other things coming to the game soon, so this game will get better and better soon. Why wait for this awesome experience later? Join Today!


i changed some of the wording around...add or took something out...and i also added the forum part to the ad Tongue sorry if i kinda overdid it :/

Edit: also spaced some of the stuff to make it not look like a giant wall of text.
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i hate it when i'm ignored -_-
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Poor wittle wuider.
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@Nitz_X u really should leave this game
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i will check edits later
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okay

this is different from the new event right?
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Dear gamers. I hope you are all fine. At this article I am going to present you a new browser based Pokemon Style Monster MMORPG Game. This game is totally free to play forever.The game is MonsterMMORPG

Now lets talk about some of the main components of this game. This game is about Monsters just like Pokemon You are exploring professionally designed maps (of which there are 83 right now) and trying to collect monsters. You have to battle with them and catch them before you are able to train them. You are not only battling wild Monsters but also you can battle a monster team made by one of your friends. Yes we have a very well working PVP system For giving you idea about how advanced the battling system it is 13k lines of code ^^ Monster MMORPG also has an integrated chat system. The chat system is not a pre-made one, it is developed for Monster MMORPG by the game developer. So while playing the game, you can also chat with your fellow players. It supports total 32 different languages.

Now I suppose you wonder what this game looks like or how do I play it. This is the game main page url : http://www.monstermmorpg.com . This is the official game videos page : http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Videos . If you watch the game videos you will learn how to play at least 95% percent. The game screenshots can be found from here http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Screenshots . Also we have awesome banners if you want to check out : http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Banners. This is the registration url : http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Register . The list of monsters that Monster MMORPG can be found here :http://www.monstermmorpg.com/MonsterDex . MonsterMMORPG also has a DeviantArt group so if you are DeviantArt member you can also join our group :http://pokemon-fakemon-game.deviantart.com/ . Monster MMORPG also has official Youtube, Twitter and Facebook channels so you also may want to subscribes those channels : http://www.youtube.com/user/MonsterMMORPG , http://twitter.com/MonsterMMORPG , http://www.facebook.com/MonsterMMORPG
MonsterMMORPG even has a wiki ----> MonsterMMORPG Wiki page

Since we have provided the necessary urls now lets tell you some unique features we have:

* MonsterMMORPG as a policy and principle is strictly against cheating. Because of this very reason MonsterMMORPG is taking every possible precautions such as checking every action at server side, having in game integrated security image question after certain number of actions.
* MonsterMMORPG is also trying to make its game available for every age group so parents can safely allow their children to play the game.
* MonsterMMORPG has a very strong server which almost never fails, so you can play the game anytime, anywhere without lag.
* MonsterMMORPG has awesomely designed game mechanics. The Monster moves have lots of great effects such as : bleeding, multiple hit, 2 turn moves, burning, crippling and many more.
* MonsterMMORPG has 100 different natures which makes each monster is unique.
* MonsterMMORPG has Unique Values system which is determined when a wild Monster is caught which makes each monster unique.
* MonsterMMORPG has Training Points system which lets users specialize in certain stats and helps make each Monster unique.
*MonsterMMORPG has over 600 different types of monsters and more to come


- Many more great features that are waiting to be explored by you.
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Here Cefurkan




Hello people. At this article, on behalf of Monster MMORPG, I would like to present to you A New Spin On Pokemon, complete with Original Monsters and a true MMORPG-Feel. This game is guaranteed free to play, forever. It isn't a fan made game, so rest assured that it's different from Pokemon in all the right ways. Most importantly among these is that it cannot be shut down by Nintendo like other Pokemon Games out there because we don't use any of Nintendo’s Trademarked & Copyrighted material.

Now let’s talk about some of the main components of this game. This game at it's core is about Monsters, making it similar to Pokemon. You are exploring professionally designed Maps (there are currently 83) and trying to collect Monsters. You have to do battle with them and catch them before they are tame enough to be trained. You will not only be battling Wild Monsters but also you can battle a Monster team made by one of your friends. Yes, that means we have a working PvP system. To give you a mild idea about how advanced the battling system really is: it contains thirteen THOUSAND lines of code! MonsterMMORPG also has an integrated chat system coded specifically for the game. So while playing the game, you can also chat with your fellow players. It supports a total of 32 different languages.

-) At this point, you're probably wondering what this game looks like and how to play it.
- This is the game main page: www.monstermmorpg.com.
- This is the official game videos page: www.monstermmorpg.com/Videos. If you watch the game videos, you will understand all the important stuff.
- The game screenshots can be found here: www.monstermmorpg.com/Screenshots.
- If you want to advertise, we have awesome banners for you: www.monstermmorpg.com/Banners.
- When you're ready to register, go here: www.monstermmorpg.com/Register.
- This links you to the list of Monsters currently in-game: www.monstermmorpg.com/MonsterDex.
- MonsterMMORPG has a DeviantArt group for any Deviants who'd like to join: MonsterMMORPG DeviantArt.
- For our official Youtube, Twitter and Facebook channels, go here and subscribe: www.youtube.com/user/MonsterMMORPG, http://twitter.com/MonsterMMORPG, www.facebook.com/MonsterMMORPG.

If you haven't already peeked at our unique features for yourself, we'll lay down the basics:

* MonsterMMORPG has a strict policy against cheating. Because of this very reason MonsterMMORPG is taking every possible precaution such as checking every action at server side, having in game integrated security image question after a certain number of actions.
* MonsterMMORPG is also trying to maintain content acceptable for every age group so parents can safely allow their children to play.
* MonsterMMORPG has a very strong and reliable server, so you can play the game anytime, anywhere without lag.
* MonsterMMORPG has awesomely designed game mechanics. The Monsters' Moves have tons of great effects such as "bleeding", "multiple hit", "2 turn moves", "burning", "crippling" and many more.
* MonsterMMORPG has 100 different natures which makes Monsters even more different.
* MonsterMMORPG uses a Unique Values system which is determined when a Wild Monster is caught which makes each monster statistically unique.
* MonsterMMORPG includes a Training Points system which lets users specialize in certain stats and helps make each Monster even MORE their own.

And that hardly scratches the surface. If you really want to know what you're about, immerse yourself in the Monster MMORPG.

We strongly suggest you to watch our tutorial videos while playing the game. Latest tutorial videos always can be found here : Monster MMORPG Tutorial Videos PlayList On Youtube

Very important notices :
1- For walking on the map use either w,a,s,d or arrow keys on the keyboard. Keep pressing them for smooth moving.
2- Game works best on Firefox latest version or Google Chrome latest version


As a matter of fact, here we'll let the game speak for itself. Please click on images to see them in full size.Never hack others account or you will pay the consciousnesses.
My Dream is Too Protect The Unique Team And our Members Forever No matter what

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Off-topic but, this thread is often the thread where advertisers post..wonder why?
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Hello people. At this article, on behalf of Monster MMORPG, I would like to present to you A New Spin On [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com]Pokemon[/url], complete with Original Monsters and a true [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Register]MMORPG[/url]-Feel. This game is guaranteed free to play, forever. It isn't a fan made game, so rest assured that it's different from Pokemon in all the right ways. Most importantly among these is that it cannot be shut down by Nintendo like other [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Pokemon-Games]Pokemon Games[/url] out there because we don't use any of Nintendo’s Trademarked & Copyrighted material.

Now let’s talk about some of the main components of this game. This game at it's core is about Monsters, making it similar to Pokemon. You are exploring professionally designed [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Maps]Maps[/url] (there are currently 83) and trying to collect Monsters. You have to do battle with them and catch them before they are tame enough to be trained. You will not only be battling Wild Monsters but also you can battle a [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/MonsterDex]Monster[/url] team made by one of your friends. Yes, that means we have a working PvP system. To give you a mild idea about how advanced the battling system really is: it contains thirteen THOUSAND lines of code! MonsterMMORPG also has an integrated chat system coded specifically for the game. So while playing the game, you can also chat with your fellow players. It supports a total of 32 different languages.

-) At this point, you're probably wondering what this game looks like and how to play it.
- This is the game main page: [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com]www.monstermmorpg.com[/url].
- This is the official game videos page: [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Videos]www.monstermmorpg.com/Videos[/url]. If you watch the game videos, you will understand all the important stuff.
- The game screenshots can be found here: [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Screenshots]www.monstermmorpg.com/Screenshots[/url].
- If you want to advertise, we have awesome banners for you: [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Banners]www.monstermmorpg.com/Banners[/url].
- When you're ready to register, go here: [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/Register]www.monstermmorpg.com/Register[/url].
- This links you to the list of Monsters currently in-game: [url=http://www.monstermmorpg.com/MonsterDex]www.monstermmorpg.com/MonsterDex[/url].
- MonsterMMORPG has a DeviantArt group for any Deviants who'd like to join: [url=http://pokemon-fakemon-game.deviantart.com]MonsterMMORPG DeviantArt[/url].
- For our official Youtube, Twitter and Facebook channels, go here and subscribe: [url=http://www.youtube.com/user/MonsterMMORPG]www.youtube.com/user/MonsterMMORPG[/url], [url=http://twitter.com/MonsterMMORPG]http://twitter.com/MonsterMMORPG[/url], [url=http://www.facebook.com/MonsterMMORPG]www.facebook.com/MonsterMMORPG[/url].

If you haven't already peeked at our unique features for yourself, we'll lay down the basics:

* MonsterMMORPG has a strict policy against cheating. Because of this very reason MonsterMMORPG is taking every possible precaution such as checking every action at server side, having in game integrated security image question after a certain number of actions.
* MonsterMMORPG is also trying to maintain content acceptable for every age group so parents can safely allow their children to play.
* MonsterMMORPG has a very strong and reliable server, so you can play the game anytime, anywhere without lag.
* MonsterMMORPG has awesomely designed game mechanics. The Monsters' Moves have tons of great effects such as "bleeding", "multiple hit", "2 turn moves", "burning", "crippling" and many more.
* MonsterMMORPG has 100 different natures which makes Monsters even more different.
* MonsterMMORPG uses a Unique Values system which is determined when a Wild Monster is caught which makes each monster statistically unique.
* MonsterMMORPG includes a Training Points system which lets users specialize in certain stats and helps make each Monster even MORE their own.

And that hardly scratches the surface. If you really want to know what you're about, immerse yourself in the Monster MMORPG.

We strongly suggest you to watch our tutorial videos while playing the game. Latest tutorial videos always can be found here : [url=http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL89772D2A75FC43B3]Monster MMORPG Tutorial Videos PlayList On Youtube[/url]

[b]Very important notices :
1- For walking on the map use either w,a,s,d or arrow keys on the keyboard. Keep pressing them for smooth moving.
2- Game works best on Firefox latest version or Google Chrome latest version[/b]

As a matter of fact, here we'll let the game speak for itself. Please click on images to see them in full size.
I am probably the most skilled writer/ grammar here, so here's what i strongly suggest


Greetings to all whom stumble upon this article, on behalf of Monster MMORPG, I would like to introduce you to A whole New Spin on Pokemon, complete with Original Monsters and a promising MMORPG-Feel. This game is guaranteed and free to play inevitably. This isn't a fan made game, so you are guaranteed a unique and different experience.
Most importantly, among this it cannot be shut down by Nintendo, like other Pokemon Games floating about, because we don't use any of Nintendo’s Trademarked & Copyrighted material.



Now let’s talk about some of the main components of this game. This game at it's core is about Monsters, portraying it as Pokemon. You can explore professionally designed Maps (there are currently 83) and attempt to collect Monsters. You must battle and catch them before they are tamed enough to be trained. Battling monsters is not all you will experience, we also have a fully functional PVP system so you can battle all your friend. To give you a mild idea on how advanced our battling system really is: it contains thirteen THOUSAND lines of code! MonsterMMORPG also has an integrated chat system which is coded specifically for the game. So while you are playing the game, you may also chat with your fellow players, It supports a total of 32 different languages.


-) At this point, you're probably wondering what this game looks like and how to play.
- This is the game main page: www.monstermmorpg.com.
- This is the official game videos page: www.monstermmorpg.com/Videos. If you watch the game videos, you will understand all the important stuff.
- The game screenshots can be found here: www.monstermmorpg.com/Screenshots.
- If you want to advertise, we have awesome banners for you: www.monstermmorpg.com/Banners.
- When you're ready to register, come here: www.monstermmorpg.com/Register.
- This links you to the list of Monsters currently in-game: www.monstermmorpg.com/MonsterDex.
- MonsterMMORPG has a DeviantArt group for any Deviants who'd like to join: MonsterMMORPG DeviantArt.
- For our official Youtube, Twitter and Facebook channels, go here and subscribe: www.youtube.com/user/MonsterMMORPG, http://twitter.com/MonsterMMORPG, www.facebook.com/MonsterMMORPG.


If you haven't peeked at our unique features for yourself yet, we'll lay down the basics:



* MonsterMMORPG has a strict policy against cheating, this is the very reason MonsterMMORPG is taking every possible precaution such as checking every action at server side and having an in game integrated security image question after a certain number of actions.
* MonsterMMORPG is also trying to maintain content acceptable for every age group so parents can safely allow their children to play.
* MonsterMMORPG has a very strong and reliable server, so you can play the game anytime, anywhere without lag.
* MonsterMMORPG has amazingly designed game mechanics. The Monsters have tons of moves and great effects such as "bleeding", "multiple hit", "2 turn moves", "burning", "crippling" and many more.
* MonsterMMORPG has 100 different natures which makes Monsters even more different.
* MonsterMMORPG uses a Unique Values system which is determined when a Wild Monster is caught which makes each monster statistically unique.
* MonsterMMORPG includes a Training Points system which lets users specialize in certain stats and helps make each Monster even MORE their own.

And this hardly scratches the surface. If you really want to know what you're about, immerse yourself in the Monster MMORPG.




We strongly suggest you to watch our tutorial videos while playing the game. The latest tutorial videos can always be found here : Monster MMORPG Tutorial Videos PlayList On Youtube

Very important notices :
1- For walking on the map use either w,a,s,d or arrow keys on the keyboard. Keep pressing them for smooth moving.
2- Game works best on Firefox latest version or Google Chrome latest version


As a matter of fact, here we'll let the game speak for itself. Please click on images to see them in full size.





Here is my version of this, i can guarantee no one else's is better, use mine it is as good as it is gonna get.
If you have already picked someone else's i highly recommend you switch to mine. whats your guys feedback? please read mine and tell me what you think, you wont be disappointed. :]
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This is a re edit, my previous post had 2-6 mistakes. please ignore the other one and read this one, thank you :]



I am probably the most skilled writer/ grammar here, so here's what i strongly suggest


Greetings to all whom stumble upon this article, on behalf of Monster MMORPG, I would like to introduce you to A whole New Spin on Pokemon, complete with Original Monsters and a promising MMORPG-Feel. This game is guaranteed and free to play inevitably. This isn't a fan made game, so you are guaranteed a unique and different experience.
Most importantly, among this it cannot be shut down by Nintendo, like other Pokemon Games floating about, because we don't use any of Nintendo’s Trademarked & Copyrighted material.



Now let’s talk about some of the main components of this game. This game at it's core is about Monsters, portraying it as Pokemon. You can explore professionally designed Maps (there are currently 83) and attempt to collect Monsters. You must battle and catch them before they are tamed enough to be trained. Battling monsters is not all you will experience, we also have a fully functional PVP system so you can battle all your friend. To give you a mild idea on how advanced our battling system really is: it contains thirteen THOUSAND lines of code! MonsterMMORPG also has an integrated chat system which is coded specifically for the game. So while you are playing the game, you may also chat with your fellow players, It supports a total of 32 different languages.


-) At this point, you're probably wondering what this game looks like and how to play.
- This is the game main page: www.monstermmorpg.com.
- This is the official game videos page: www.monstermmorpg.com/Videos. If you watch the game videos, you will understand all the important stuff.
- The game screenshots can be found here: www.monstermmorpg.com/Screenshots.
- If you want to advertise, we have awesome banners for you: www.monstermmorpg.com/Banners.
- When you're ready to register, come here: www.monstermmorpg.com/Register.
- This links you to the list of Monsters currently in-game: www.monstermmorpg.com/MonsterDex.
- MonsterMMORPG has a DeviantArt group for any Deviants who'd like to join: MonsterMMORPG DeviantArt.
- For our official Youtube, Twitter and Facebook channels, go here and subscribe:www.youtube.com/user/MonsterMMORPG, http://twitter.com/MonsterMMORPG,www.facebook.com/MonsterMMORPG.


If you haven't peeked at our unique features for yourself yet, we'll lay down the basics:



* MonsterMMORPG has a strict policy against cheating, this is the very reason MonsterMMORPG is taking every possible precaution such as checking every action at server side and having an in game integrated security image question after a certain number of actions.
* MonsterMMORPG is also trying to maintain content acceptable for every age group so parents can safely allow their children to play.
* MonsterMMORPG has a very strong and reliable server, so you can play the game anytime, anywhere without lag.
* MonsterMMORPG has amazingly designed game mechanics. The Monsters have tons of moves and great effects such as "bleeding", "multiple hit", "2 turn moves", "burning", "crippling" and many more.
* MonsterMMORPG has 100 different natures which makes Monsters even more different.
* MonsterMMORPG uses a Unique Values system which is determined when a Wild Monster is caught which makes each monster statistically unique.
* MonsterMMORPG includes a Training Points system which lets users specialize in certain stats and helps make each Monster even MORE their own.

And this hardly scratches the surface. If you really want to know what you're about, immerse yourself in the Monster MMORPG.




We strongly suggest you to watch our tutorial videos while playing the game. The latest tutorial videos can always be found here : Monster MMORPG Tutorial Videos PlayList On Youtube

Very important notices :
1- For walking on the map use either w,a,s,d or arrow keys on the keyboard. Keep pressing them for smooth moving.
2- Game works best on Firefox latest version or Google Chrome latest version


As a matter of fact, here we'll let the game speak for itself. Please click on images to see them in full size.





Here is my version of this, i can guarantee no one else's is better, use mine it is as good as it is gonna get.
If you have already picked someone else's i highly recommend you switch to mine. whats your guys feedback? please read mine and tell me what you think, you wont be disappointed. :]


This is a re edit, my previous post had 2-6 mistakes. please ignore the other one and read this one, thank you :]
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